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The article is a good one but, it seems a a bit like a brochure, havng gone to the cam fr the las 4 years I can validate,most of these things but that's not the point, (we can't say things have an amazing view etc. so I marked it with {{ advertisement}}. Tennekis 18:46, 29 July 2007
I started on a major copy edit last night and will resume as time permits over the next few days. If anyone would like to participate just give me a head's up. Thanks. Dtgriffith ( talk) 00:52, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
I have worked through this article as far as I can. It lacks verifiable statements and contains some confusing language as a result. The copyedit request will be left on the article until further improvement has been made and final copyedit can be performed. I am happy to collaborate on developing this article further should anyone be interested, I happen to be familiar with the geographic area and even attended Camp Buckskin for a week in 1986. Just contact me on my Talk page. Thanks. Dtgriffith ( talk) 17:30, 28 March 2010 (UTC)
This article is primarily focused on the camps operated by the Westchester-Putnam Council. I have a few suggestions on areas to develop:
Dtgriffith ( talk) 17:47, 28 March 2010 (UTC)
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The article is a good one but, it seems a a bit like a brochure, havng gone to the cam fr the las 4 years I can validate,most of these things but that's not the point, (we can't say things have an amazing view etc. so I marked it with {{ advertisement}}. Tennekis 18:46, 29 July 2007
I started on a major copy edit last night and will resume as time permits over the next few days. If anyone would like to participate just give me a head's up. Thanks. Dtgriffith ( talk) 00:52, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
I have worked through this article as far as I can. It lacks verifiable statements and contains some confusing language as a result. The copyedit request will be left on the article until further improvement has been made and final copyedit can be performed. I am happy to collaborate on developing this article further should anyone be interested, I happen to be familiar with the geographic area and even attended Camp Buckskin for a week in 1986. Just contact me on my Talk page. Thanks. Dtgriffith ( talk) 17:30, 28 March 2010 (UTC)
This article is primarily focused on the camps operated by the Westchester-Putnam Council. I have a few suggestions on areas to develop:
Dtgriffith ( talk) 17:47, 28 March 2010 (UTC)