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Wendy Hamilton was the president of a large nation-wide organization during which time major changes were made to improve the effectiveness of the organization.

Why POV tag?

I feel that the article as written is inappropriate opinionated. I will highlight the reasons with quotes in a moment V. Joe ( talk) 17:22, 2 February 2009 (UTC) reply

As MADD's president, she enhanced the organization's image by appearing on ABC's "Good Morning America", CNN, MSMC, and NBC's "Today Show". Her leadership success led Feminine Fortunes magazine to name her one of "America's Most Successful Women" in 2003.

This should perhaps be rewritten something like this.

As MADD's president, she appeared on ABC's Good Morning America, CNN, MSNBC and NBC's Today Show. Her perceived leadership success led Feminine Fortunes magazine to name her America's Most Successful Women in 2003.

V. Joe ( talk) 17:26, 2 February 2009 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Untitled

Wendy Hamilton was the president of a large nation-wide organization during which time major changes were made to improve the effectiveness of the organization.

Why POV tag?

I feel that the article as written is inappropriate opinionated. I will highlight the reasons with quotes in a moment V. Joe ( talk) 17:22, 2 February 2009 (UTC) reply

As MADD's president, she enhanced the organization's image by appearing on ABC's "Good Morning America", CNN, MSMC, and NBC's "Today Show". Her leadership success led Feminine Fortunes magazine to name her one of "America's Most Successful Women" in 2003.

This should perhaps be rewritten something like this.

As MADD's president, she appeared on ABC's Good Morning America, CNN, MSNBC and NBC's Today Show. Her perceived leadership success led Feminine Fortunes magazine to name her America's Most Successful Women in 2003.

V. Joe ( talk) 17:26, 2 February 2009 (UTC) reply


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