When Cleveland was inaugurated as president, he was still a bachelor, having never married Redundant
The receptions were received positively by the press preference to "well received"
She had no jewelry with the exception of her engagement ring -> She wore no jewelry other than her engagement ring.
one for the diplomatic corps and one for the general public. -> and another for the general public
Frances wore a gray suit and a gray hat, the latter of which was lined with velvet, picot ribbons, and ostrich feathers. -> Frances wore a gray suit and a gray hat which was lined with velvet, picot ribbons, and ostrich feathers.
The guest listing would look more presentable if we split it into two columns
Spotchecks done on that one web source; assuming good faith on facts supported by offline sources. However, could I ask you to be consistent with the citation formatting? If you prefer the Harvard citation format, stick with it.
The guest list should already be in two columns. Is it not showing on your display? I know that sidebar templates can interfere with that sometimes. The Bride of the White House is separated from the other citations because otherwise it would require nine duplicated citations. All typographical concerns are now addressed, and I've added links to the sources at archive.org when possible.
Thebiguglyalien (
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16:04, 17 December 2022 (UTC)reply
When Cleveland was inaugurated as president, he was still a bachelor, having never married Redundant
The receptions were received positively by the press preference to "well received"
She had no jewelry with the exception of her engagement ring -> She wore no jewelry other than her engagement ring.
one for the diplomatic corps and one for the general public. -> and another for the general public
Frances wore a gray suit and a gray hat, the latter of which was lined with velvet, picot ribbons, and ostrich feathers. -> Frances wore a gray suit and a gray hat which was lined with velvet, picot ribbons, and ostrich feathers.
The guest listing would look more presentable if we split it into two columns
Spotchecks done on that one web source; assuming good faith on facts supported by offline sources. However, could I ask you to be consistent with the citation formatting? If you prefer the Harvard citation format, stick with it.
The guest list should already be in two columns. Is it not showing on your display? I know that sidebar templates can interfere with that sometimes. The Bride of the White House is separated from the other citations because otherwise it would require nine duplicated citations. All typographical concerns are now addressed, and I've added links to the sources at archive.org when possible.
Thebiguglyalien (
talk)
16:04, 17 December 2022 (UTC)reply