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I hope you like the article. I found some relevant and up to date documents. However, the article does not contain precise information on every issue and will need to be updated from time to time.
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If you have answers or sources of information, please feel free to improve the article on your own, post your suggestions on this discussion page or on my user page. Thank you for your interest and help! Kerres ( Talk) 19:00, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
"septic tanks truckers" doesn't seem to make sense. Maybe "septic tank truckers" or "septic tanks' truckers" or "trucks' septic tanks" might make sense. What is it supposed to mean?
"had proved to be little sustainable": this use of "little" sounds a little odd. I'm not sure why. Maybe it's OK. Maybe "had proved to be hardly sustainable" or "had proved to be of little sustainability". I can't think of a really good wording.
"demand-responsive strategy": if this is the wording used in the source, OK. Otherwise I would put "demand-response strategy".
"...a number of projects called Assistance Program..." Perhaps "Program" could be changed to "Programs"? Otherwise it doesn't make sense -- it's mentioning one program, not a number of projects.
"access to the according indicators:" I don't understand what "according" means here. Maybe a different word would be better.
Re the references in the footnotes after "maintenance of a water meter is added": the first footnote mentions a document but should specify what document it's talking about. The second footnote has some information, then gives a source by mentioning its URL (web address) only. it's best not to give only a web address: give the title, author, date etc. of the document, so that if the web address stops working we'll still know what it is. Earlier in the paragraph it says "according to a thesis": I would prefer if this were more clear. Does it mean a PhD thesis or what? Maybe it should have a footnote attached to the word "thesis" or at the end of the sentence containing that word for the first time, with information about the document.
I'm guessing that the unit "l/p/d" means "litre per person per day". Could it be wikilinked, or spelled out in words in parentheses?
"has established a country presence": I would change this to either "has established a presence in the country" or "has established a country-wide presence" depending on what is meant: the second one means they're all over the country, while the first means they're in at least one place in the country.
I read the whole article. I didn't check the infobox or the references. It looks good! I like the images in this one and the Ghana one. ☺ Coppertwig ( talk) 23:07, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
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I hope you like the article. I found some relevant and up to date documents. However, the article does not contain precise information on every issue and will need to be updated from time to time.
The most urgent gaps of information are summarized in the following questions:
I was not able to find the following documents online. If anybody has access or knows how to access them, please let me know.
If you have answers or sources of information, please feel free to improve the article on your own, post your suggestions on this discussion page or on my user page. Thank you for your interest and help! Kerres ( Talk) 19:00, 27 May 2008 (UTC)
"septic tanks truckers" doesn't seem to make sense. Maybe "septic tank truckers" or "septic tanks' truckers" or "trucks' septic tanks" might make sense. What is it supposed to mean?
"had proved to be little sustainable": this use of "little" sounds a little odd. I'm not sure why. Maybe it's OK. Maybe "had proved to be hardly sustainable" or "had proved to be of little sustainability". I can't think of a really good wording.
"demand-responsive strategy": if this is the wording used in the source, OK. Otherwise I would put "demand-response strategy".
"...a number of projects called Assistance Program..." Perhaps "Program" could be changed to "Programs"? Otherwise it doesn't make sense -- it's mentioning one program, not a number of projects.
"access to the according indicators:" I don't understand what "according" means here. Maybe a different word would be better.
Re the references in the footnotes after "maintenance of a water meter is added": the first footnote mentions a document but should specify what document it's talking about. The second footnote has some information, then gives a source by mentioning its URL (web address) only. it's best not to give only a web address: give the title, author, date etc. of the document, so that if the web address stops working we'll still know what it is. Earlier in the paragraph it says "according to a thesis": I would prefer if this were more clear. Does it mean a PhD thesis or what? Maybe it should have a footnote attached to the word "thesis" or at the end of the sentence containing that word for the first time, with information about the document.
I'm guessing that the unit "l/p/d" means "litre per person per day". Could it be wikilinked, or spelled out in words in parentheses?
"has established a country presence": I would change this to either "has established a presence in the country" or "has established a country-wide presence" depending on what is meant: the second one means they're all over the country, while the first means they're in at least one place in the country.
I read the whole article. I didn't check the infobox or the references. It looks good! I like the images in this one and the Ghana one. ☺ Coppertwig ( talk) 23:07, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
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