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Lead
- Link [[Music jouralism|music critics]]
- Done Y
Background
- Jay appeared → Jay-Z appeared
- on January of 2011, → in January 2011,
- Jay stated that the less → Jay-Z stated that the less
- that "Life Off" was → Is it mean't to say Life and not Lift?
- Link Frank Ocean in the picture.
- All done, "Life Off" was a typo Y
Music and style
- Who is that picture of? What does it have to do with the section?
- Clarified the use of the visual, changed photo to one that was easier to decipher the meaning of. Y Done?
Lyrical themes
Content
- Singer Ocean and The-Dream → I assume this is Frank Ocean. Also, it should be "singers", plural.
- Done Y
Release and promotion
Singles
- January 11 → Can you add the years to all dates please, as it is getting a bit confusing.
- Clarified. Y
- You don't need to keep saying Billboard Hot 100 apart from the first time. Hot 100 is fine from then on.
- Done. Y
- Clarified. Y
Critical response
Commercial performance
- Done. Y
- This could be expanded more with some European info.
- Expanded. Y Correctly?
Accolades
Track listing
Personnel
- Why are Jay and West not listed as writers?
- Added. Y
Charts and certifications
- No issues.
- A release history table would be good.
- Unneeded; as explained in the release section, to avoid leaks, the album was released internationally on the same date onto iTunes.
References
- MTV News should not be italics.
- MTV's publisher is Viacom, not MTV Networks.
- FN28 has something wrong with the Rolling Stone link.
- None of the titles should have capitals words.
- FN63 has no date, accessdate etc.
- Remove "The" from "The Official Charts Company". They don't use the "the" anymore.
- FN138 is missing work, publisher.
- All done I believe. Y
Summary
On hold for 7 days.
Aaron •
You Da One 17:52, 4 August 2012 (UTC)
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- I believe I have addressed your concerns.
Bruce Campbell (
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- Passing.
Aaron •
You Da One 22:19, 4 August 2012 (UTC)
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