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"When Eilish and Finneas were recording the song, the track title was titled "Watch & Burn". The track later became two separate songs. One being "Watch" and the other being "&Burn"" → "The song was originally titled "Watch & Burn", before becoming two separate tracks, one being "Watch" and the other being "
&Burn", a collaboration with
Vince Staples"
"According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com" → "According to sheet music published by
Hal Leonard Music Publishing at Musicnotes.com"
"80-84" → "80–84"
"of
C Major. Eilish's vocals span a range of
G3 to
C5" → "of
C Major, while Eilish's vocals range from
G3 to
C5"
"Eilish croons that her former lover has changed" → "Eilish croons about her former lover changing", also, this doesn't seem to backed up by a ref, am I missing something?
LOVI33, it's supported by two reliable sources: "Vice" and "Atwood Magazine".
"[8][4][7]", refs need to be in numerical order
Done
Reception
Remove target on music critics
"number 22 on their" → "number 22 on the website's"
"described the song's chorus" → "described the chorus"
"most notably being certified platinum" → "including platinum certifications"
Done
Promotion
"An official music video was released on September 18, 2017, directed by actress
Megan Park" → "A
music video for "Watch" was released on September 18, 2017 and directed by Canadian actress
Megan Park"
"The singer stated in an interview with Vice, Eilish states Park came up with Eilish" → "The singer stated in an interview with Vice that Park came up with her"
"I walk over to the other "ladder"." → "I walk over to the other 'ladder,'", per
MOS:QWQ
"old me like, "Screw you, I'm going to light you on fire now."" → "old me like, 'Screw you, I'm going to light you on fire now.'", per MOS:QWQ
""Watch" was also included" → "It was also included"
MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Certifications and sales for "Watch"
Done
Release history
Again, MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Release dates and formats for "Watch"
"Format" → "Format(s)"
Done
References
Copyvio score needs work at 66.2%, check your wording of ref 8. It seems as though the lyrical analysis is interfering with lyric website
Genius, maybe remove some of it.
Hey
The Ultimate Boss, I think you were kind of confused with some of the ref improvements I was suggesting so I have gone ahead a fixed them for you
here. Unfortunately, I can't pass this yet. For one, You need a source that calls "Watch" a
sentimental ballad, you cannot just assume. The source you have given just simply calls it a
ballad. Also, I reviewed every source you gave for Eilish singing about her lover changing in the chorus and maybe I'm missing something, but I have reviewed every source (
Atwood,
Insider, and
Vice) you gave, and all just talk about it's lyrics. If I'm missing something could you quote it?
LOVI3313:19, 15 August 2020 (UTC)reply
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"When Eilish and Finneas were recording the song, the track title was titled "Watch & Burn". The track later became two separate songs. One being "Watch" and the other being "&Burn"" → "The song was originally titled "Watch & Burn", before becoming two separate tracks, one being "Watch" and the other being "
&Burn", a collaboration with
Vince Staples"
"According to sheet music published at Musicnotes.com" → "According to sheet music published by
Hal Leonard Music Publishing at Musicnotes.com"
"80-84" → "80–84"
"of
C Major. Eilish's vocals span a range of
G3 to
C5" → "of
C Major, while Eilish's vocals range from
G3 to
C5"
"Eilish croons that her former lover has changed" → "Eilish croons about her former lover changing", also, this doesn't seem to backed up by a ref, am I missing something?
LOVI33, it's supported by two reliable sources: "Vice" and "Atwood Magazine".
"[8][4][7]", refs need to be in numerical order
Done
Reception
Remove target on music critics
"number 22 on their" → "number 22 on the website's"
"described the song's chorus" → "described the chorus"
"most notably being certified platinum" → "including platinum certifications"
Done
Promotion
"An official music video was released on September 18, 2017, directed by actress
Megan Park" → "A
music video for "Watch" was released on September 18, 2017 and directed by Canadian actress
Megan Park"
"The singer stated in an interview with Vice, Eilish states Park came up with Eilish" → "The singer stated in an interview with Vice that Park came up with her"
"I walk over to the other "ladder"." → "I walk over to the other 'ladder,'", per
MOS:QWQ
"old me like, "Screw you, I'm going to light you on fire now."" → "old me like, 'Screw you, I'm going to light you on fire now.'", per MOS:QWQ
""Watch" was also included" → "It was also included"
MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Certifications and sales for "Watch"
Done
Release history
Again, MOS:TABLECAPTION, probably: Release dates and formats for "Watch"
"Format" → "Format(s)"
Done
References
Copyvio score needs work at 66.2%, check your wording of ref 8. It seems as though the lyrical analysis is interfering with lyric website
Genius, maybe remove some of it.
Hey
The Ultimate Boss, I think you were kind of confused with some of the ref improvements I was suggesting so I have gone ahead a fixed them for you
here. Unfortunately, I can't pass this yet. For one, You need a source that calls "Watch" a
sentimental ballad, you cannot just assume. The source you have given just simply calls it a
ballad. Also, I reviewed every source you gave for Eilish singing about her lover changing in the chorus and maybe I'm missing something, but I have reviewed every source (
Atwood,
Insider, and
Vice) you gave, and all just talk about it's lyrics. If I'm missing something could you quote it?
LOVI3313:19, 15 August 2020 (UTC)reply