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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk · contribs) 19:42, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
1. May/June 1258 Suggest not 100% on the Wiki policy with this but I believe it looks neater with May-June 1258
2. Wiki link for fief and suzerain
3. famed Achaean cavalry. Why where they famous?
4. turned to her rival, Genoa Suggest turned to his rival, Genoa
5. Already from the. Suggest - from the
6. after by none other than. Suggest - after by
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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk · contribs) 19:42, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
1. May/June 1258 Suggest not 100% on the Wiki policy with this but I believe it looks neater with May-June 1258
2. Wiki link for fief and suzerain
3. famed Achaean cavalry. Why where they famous?
4. turned to her rival, Genoa Suggest turned to his rival, Genoa
5. Already from the. Suggest - from the
6. after by none other than. Suggest - after by
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns.
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12:36, 2 May 2012 (UTC)