Nice job on this. I've added a sentence to the lead to establish why this particular man was notable, not only for his decorations. In a couple other places, there was some verb and word choice issue, please check it. Otherwise, I'm ready to pass.
auntieruth(talk)18:48, 28 August 2010 (UTC)reply
Nice job on this. I've added a sentence to the lead to establish why this particular man was notable, not only for his decorations. In a couple other places, there was some verb and word choice issue, please check it. Otherwise, I'm ready to pass.
auntieruth(talk)18:48, 28 August 2010 (UTC)reply