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The language was based on eariler biography information which was also used by the White Mountain Art & Artists website. - Language was revised to remove all conflicts.
If the language is based on any prior published material (which it is, as I found verbatim copying in your original version of the article from at least two sources) it either needs to be properly attributed per
WP:PLAGIARISM if the source is in the
public domain or removed and rewritten entirely per
WP:COPYVIO if the source is copyrighted. Your assistance in cleaning up the article would be greatly appreciated.
VernoWhitney (
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13:27, 28 April 2011 (UTC)reply
A number of references have been included at the bottom. Does the text above need to have inline citations in addition to including them as references below? —Preceding
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199.223.21.12 (
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19:08, 28 April 2011 (UTC)reply
Any references which were directly consulted should be turned into some form of inline citations to indicate which particular content they support wherever possible. There's no reason for them to be duplicated, they should just be changed/moved. As presently organized, it's impossible to tell which material came from which source so it's not easily
verified by the reader.
Wikipedia:Citing sources demonstrates a variety of different options which can be used.
VernoWhitney (
talk)
19:59, 28 April 2011 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to
join the project and
contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the
United States of America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Visual arts, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
visual arts on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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Untitled
The language was based on eariler biography information which was also used by the White Mountain Art & Artists website. - Language was revised to remove all conflicts.
If the language is based on any prior published material (which it is, as I found verbatim copying in your original version of the article from at least two sources) it either needs to be properly attributed per
WP:PLAGIARISM if the source is in the
public domain or removed and rewritten entirely per
WP:COPYVIO if the source is copyrighted. Your assistance in cleaning up the article would be greatly appreciated.
VernoWhitney (
talk)
13:27, 28 April 2011 (UTC)reply
A number of references have been included at the bottom. Does the text above need to have inline citations in addition to including them as references below? —Preceding
unsigned comment added by
199.223.21.12 (
talk)
19:08, 28 April 2011 (UTC)reply
Any references which were directly consulted should be turned into some form of inline citations to indicate which particular content they support wherever possible. There's no reason for them to be duplicated, they should just be changed/moved. As presently organized, it's impossible to tell which material came from which source so it's not easily
verified by the reader.
Wikipedia:Citing sources demonstrates a variety of different options which can be used.
VernoWhitney (
talk)
19:59, 28 April 2011 (UTC)reply