Reviewer:Staxringoldtalkcontribs00:07, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
As an American I am very uninformed on the details of cricket, so let me apologize up front if I make any stupid errors or ask any silly questions. However, this could be of assisstance as it will ensure the prose can be read and understood reasonably well by an outsider.reply
I did not add this image so I don't know where it came from. Also, I'm not very good with images generally so advice would be appreciated.--
Sarastro1 (
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11:34, 2 April 2010 (UTC)reply
It's a great image, but I would tend to say remove it. Without source information we have absolutely no idea if the copyright claim is valid or not. I'm going to slap a source lacking tag on it.
Staxringoldtalkcontribs15:25, 2 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Removed image for now unless someone can source it. I'll see if someone more image-minded than me can suggest another image which is more reliable. --
Sarastro1 (
talk)
23:05, 2 April 2010 (UTC)reply
As I understand it any image taken in Australia before 1955 is out of copyright and that image was certainly in Australia and pre 1955. Why is the source important as it simply cannot be under copyright? --
LiamE (
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23:01, 6 April 2010 (UTC)reply
The lead sentence "In a Test career spanning 85 matches, Hammond captained England in 20, winning four, losing three and drawing 13" seems to (if I'm understanding) combine his general career with the subset of that when he was captain, but it comes off a little confusingly (particularly when followed by his overall batting statistics). Perhaps reorder, saying "In a Test career spanning 85 matches, he scored 7,249 runs and took 83 wickets. Hammond captained England in 20 of these Tests... [blah blah blah]."?
Can you give a brief summary of what "Bodyline" bowling is under "Bodyline tour"? It sounds vaguely like a
brushback pitch in baseball, but it seems to play a relatively large role in his career so would be useful for the average uninformed reader.
Next to retirement there is a graph of his career batting performance. The last sentence of the caption reads "The blue line is an average of his ten most recent innings." Could you change that to "The blue line is a
moving average of his ten most recent innings."?
Reviewer:Staxringoldtalkcontribs00:07, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
As an American I am very uninformed on the details of cricket, so let me apologize up front if I make any stupid errors or ask any silly questions. However, this could be of assisstance as it will ensure the prose can be read and understood reasonably well by an outsider.reply
I did not add this image so I don't know where it came from. Also, I'm not very good with images generally so advice would be appreciated.--
Sarastro1 (
talk)
11:34, 2 April 2010 (UTC)reply
It's a great image, but I would tend to say remove it. Without source information we have absolutely no idea if the copyright claim is valid or not. I'm going to slap a source lacking tag on it.
Staxringoldtalkcontribs15:25, 2 April 2010 (UTC)reply
Removed image for now unless someone can source it. I'll see if someone more image-minded than me can suggest another image which is more reliable. --
Sarastro1 (
talk)
23:05, 2 April 2010 (UTC)reply
As I understand it any image taken in Australia before 1955 is out of copyright and that image was certainly in Australia and pre 1955. Why is the source important as it simply cannot be under copyright? --
LiamE (
talk)
23:01, 6 April 2010 (UTC)reply
The lead sentence "In a Test career spanning 85 matches, Hammond captained England in 20, winning four, losing three and drawing 13" seems to (if I'm understanding) combine his general career with the subset of that when he was captain, but it comes off a little confusingly (particularly when followed by his overall batting statistics). Perhaps reorder, saying "In a Test career spanning 85 matches, he scored 7,249 runs and took 83 wickets. Hammond captained England in 20 of these Tests... [blah blah blah]."?
Can you give a brief summary of what "Bodyline" bowling is under "Bodyline tour"? It sounds vaguely like a
brushback pitch in baseball, but it seems to play a relatively large role in his career so would be useful for the average uninformed reader.
Next to retirement there is a graph of his career batting performance. The last sentence of the caption reads "The blue line is an average of his ten most recent innings." Could you change that to "The blue line is a
moving average of his ten most recent innings."?