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"...the commonly-held belief..." So, is it not an accurate belief? 70.20.160.41 ( talk) 00:10, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
Can someone please put a stub tag on this article? -- Flashflash; ( talk) 22:36, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
This may just be me, but I think the "adamantly insisted" phrasing implies that it was not a wise decision on Nullah's part. "chose to go" or something equally NPOV would be preferable, right? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.236.193.203 ( talk) 09:18, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
"adamantly insisted" seems about right to me in view of the objection of his mother substitute to the walkabout. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Smday ( talk • contribs) 00:07, 4 November 2009 (UTC)
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It seems to me that one may easily take exception to the final sentence of this article: "For white society who's existence may be more mundane; In failing to recognize and prioritize their spiritual needs only partake in walkabout when it is forced upon them in form of depression and mental illness."
To call white society's very existence "mundane" isn't acceptable ("may be more mundane" is subjective). Furthermore, failure of recognition or prioritization of spiritual needs (implying spiritual needs are present and unfulfilled) is a bold and incorrect statement. 101.167.112.200 ( talk) 09:09, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
Oops. I accidentally that entire segment before reading the talk for not having citations and making claims absolutely contradicting all other information in the article. The 'spiritual' woo aspect was applied later by a travel author trying to cash in on the noble savage epithet. So it was inherently racist to both 'white' and indigenous persons.
Also, an unrelated quip to the IP above; you said, "failure of recognition or prioritization of spiritual needs (implying spiritual needs are present and unfulfilled) is a bold and incorrect statement." I would argue that there needs to be a proof that human beings _have_ a spiritual need, or a spirit at all, or heck any evidence of anything supernatural across this wide world would sate my protestation on that ground. But as yet I have not found any evidence that a 'spiritual need' exists. Nor a spirit. Nor anything supernatural. So never fear, the offending paragraph has been removed. When you encounter something that seems daft and written like op ed with no citations and contradicting actual cited portions of the article it's perfectly acceptable to be bold and remove it. BaSH PR0MPT ( talk) 02:04, 6 January 2015 (UTC)
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referring to the commonly-held belief that Australian Aborigines would "go walkabout" This makes it sound as if the fact that Aborigines "go walkabout" is a mere belief. Please place the misplaced "belief" ref. where it belongs. |
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This section is FULL of run-on sentences and thus grammatically nonsensical statements. Perhaps someone more familiar with the topic can clean it up a little bit? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gibbousmoon100 ( talk • contribs) 09:58, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
It's very likely that this 'indigenous temporary mobility' is a concocted distraction from the real meaning of 'walkabout'. My hypothesis is that the real meaning is a cultural tradition in which individuals in the indigenous community are provided an opportunity to learn crucial life skills, specifically, the skills of self-sufficiency, mental, spriritual, physical, which strengthen the individual to peak potential which, in turn, enables the individual to become a highly productive member of the community, with the ability to resist authoritarian tricks/traps/baits, and the ability to help others achieve self-sufficiency. The width/depth of benefits are tremendous. My hypothesis concludes with the concocted distraction mentioned above being propagated to preserve authoritarian structures of domination/submission. 67.174.0.209 ( talk) Rtdrury ( talk) 04:53, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
I am moving the following uncited material here until it can be properly supported with inline citations of reliable, secondary sources, per WP:V, WP:CS, WP:IRS, WP:PSTS, WP:BLP, WP:NOR, et al. This diff shows where it was in the article. Nightscream ( talk) 16:36, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
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"...the commonly-held belief..." So, is it not an accurate belief? 70.20.160.41 ( talk) 00:10, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
Can someone please put a stub tag on this article? -- Flashflash; ( talk) 22:36, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
This may just be me, but I think the "adamantly insisted" phrasing implies that it was not a wise decision on Nullah's part. "chose to go" or something equally NPOV would be preferable, right? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.236.193.203 ( talk) 09:18, 21 March 2009 (UTC)
"adamantly insisted" seems about right to me in view of the objection of his mother substitute to the walkabout. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Smday ( talk • contribs) 00:07, 4 November 2009 (UTC)
Walkabout disambiguation page.
This should be a disambiguation page, with this article renamed Walkabout (aboriginal ritual)
Petepetepetepete (
talk)
11:34, 18 November 2009 (UTC)
It seems to me that one may easily take exception to the final sentence of this article: "For white society who's existence may be more mundane; In failing to recognize and prioritize their spiritual needs only partake in walkabout when it is forced upon them in form of depression and mental illness."
To call white society's very existence "mundane" isn't acceptable ("may be more mundane" is subjective). Furthermore, failure of recognition or prioritization of spiritual needs (implying spiritual needs are present and unfulfilled) is a bold and incorrect statement. 101.167.112.200 ( talk) 09:09, 22 December 2014 (UTC)
Oops. I accidentally that entire segment before reading the talk for not having citations and making claims absolutely contradicting all other information in the article. The 'spiritual' woo aspect was applied later by a travel author trying to cash in on the noble savage epithet. So it was inherently racist to both 'white' and indigenous persons.
Also, an unrelated quip to the IP above; you said, "failure of recognition or prioritization of spiritual needs (implying spiritual needs are present and unfulfilled) is a bold and incorrect statement." I would argue that there needs to be a proof that human beings _have_ a spiritual need, or a spirit at all, or heck any evidence of anything supernatural across this wide world would sate my protestation on that ground. But as yet I have not found any evidence that a 'spiritual need' exists. Nor a spirit. Nor anything supernatural. So never fear, the offending paragraph has been removed. When you encounter something that seems daft and written like op ed with no citations and contradicting actual cited portions of the article it's perfectly acceptable to be bold and remove it. BaSH PR0MPT ( talk) 02:04, 6 January 2015 (UTC)
The comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Walkabout/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.
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referring to the commonly-held belief that Australian Aborigines would "go walkabout" This makes it sound as if the fact that Aborigines "go walkabout" is a mere belief. Please place the misplaced "belief" ref. where it belongs. |
Last edited at 14:12, 1 July 2008 (UTC). Substituted at 10:10, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
This section is FULL of run-on sentences and thus grammatically nonsensical statements. Perhaps someone more familiar with the topic can clean it up a little bit? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gibbousmoon100 ( talk • contribs) 09:58, 21 May 2016 (UTC)
It's very likely that this 'indigenous temporary mobility' is a concocted distraction from the real meaning of 'walkabout'. My hypothesis is that the real meaning is a cultural tradition in which individuals in the indigenous community are provided an opportunity to learn crucial life skills, specifically, the skills of self-sufficiency, mental, spriritual, physical, which strengthen the individual to peak potential which, in turn, enables the individual to become a highly productive member of the community, with the ability to resist authoritarian tricks/traps/baits, and the ability to help others achieve self-sufficiency. The width/depth of benefits are tremendous. My hypothesis concludes with the concocted distraction mentioned above being propagated to preserve authoritarian structures of domination/submission. 67.174.0.209 ( talk) Rtdrury ( talk) 04:53, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
I am moving the following uncited material here until it can be properly supported with inline citations of reliable, secondary sources, per WP:V, WP:CS, WP:IRS, WP:PSTS, WP:BLP, WP:NOR, et al. This diff shows where it was in the article. Nightscream ( talk) 16:36, 26 March 2022 (UTC)
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