This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Songs section, it would be best if the short sentences be combined together in a paragraph, as the short sentences look dull in the article. In the Canadian content section, add a period after this sentence ---> "The album made much controversy in Canada concerning the system of Canadian Content". Done
In the Recording and production section, it would be best to link "Kamen" to ---> "Michael Kamen", I mean I was wondering who "Kamen" was, until I read the source. Also, this would help out a reader who reads this article. Same section, link "Beauty in the Beast" and if your talking about the film, italicize per
here, but if your talking about the theme leave it with quotations. Same section, it would be best to introduce names first instead of introducing them afterwards; Link "Robert John "Mutt" Lange" after the mention of Adams in the first paragraph, do the same with "Michael Kamen" introduce the full name first and then add the last name afterwards. Same section, link "Kevin Costner" and italicize "Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves". In the Songs section, it would be best if "(Everything I Do) I Do It for You", "Bryan Adams", "Billboard", "Grammy Awards of 1992", and "Billboard Hot 100" once, per
here. In the Release and reception section, un-link "Mutt Lange", and mention "Mutt Lange" in the Canadian content section instead of adding his full name, and italicize "Billboard 200" and "Billboard 100". Again, link "(Everything I Do) I Do It for You" just once. Also, link "Canadian content" once. In the Waking Up the World tour section, fix the dates correctly, per
here. Done
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Well, after reading the article, I have gone off and passed the article. Congratulations. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a
GA review. Thank you to all who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations. -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 18:57, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the Songs section, it would be best if the short sentences be combined together in a paragraph, as the short sentences look dull in the article. In the Canadian content section, add a period after this sentence ---> "The album made much controversy in Canada concerning the system of Canadian Content". Done
In the Recording and production section, it would be best to link "Kamen" to ---> "Michael Kamen", I mean I was wondering who "Kamen" was, until I read the source. Also, this would help out a reader who reads this article. Same section, link "Beauty in the Beast" and if your talking about the film, italicize per
here, but if your talking about the theme leave it with quotations. Same section, it would be best to introduce names first instead of introducing them afterwards; Link "Robert John "Mutt" Lange" after the mention of Adams in the first paragraph, do the same with "Michael Kamen" introduce the full name first and then add the last name afterwards. Same section, link "Kevin Costner" and italicize "Robin Hood: Prince of Thieves". In the Songs section, it would be best if "(Everything I Do) I Do It for You", "Bryan Adams", "Billboard", "Grammy Awards of 1992", and "Billboard Hot 100" once, per
here. In the Release and reception section, un-link "Mutt Lange", and mention "Mutt Lange" in the Canadian content section instead of adding his full name, and italicize "Billboard 200" and "Billboard 100". Again, link "(Everything I Do) I Do It for You" just once. Also, link "Canadian content" once. In the Waking Up the World tour section, fix the dates correctly, per
here. Done
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Well, after reading the article, I have gone off and passed the article. Congratulations. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to take it to a
GA review. Thank you to all who worked hard to bring it to this status, and congratulations. -- ThinkBlue (HitBLUE) 18:57, 7 September 2008 (UTC)reply