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Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
Got a few GANs on hold but that is only because users haven't finished their responses yet, so I'll review this. --
K. Peake 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
"It is a
pop-rap track. The song's lyrics" → "A
pop-rap track, its lyrics"
Done
"finally accepting KSI's success." → "finally accepting his success."
Done
"and it reached" → "and it further reached"
Done
"Netherlands and New Zealand." → "the Netherlands and New Zealand."
Done
Remove wikilink on costume
Done
Background
Why isn't this or a similar section at the start of the article's body?
Done
Music and lyrics
Verse–chorus form and the length are both unsourced
Not done you have still kept this --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
There is information from
4 and
16 about the music and vocals that can easily be added here; take the chorus, synths and bass for example
Done
"KSI continued," → "He continued,"
Done
Release and promotion
"revealing the song's title as" → "revealing the title as"
Done
Not done you should implement the above version, not an altered one --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"debut studio album, Dissimulation (2020)." → "debut studio album Dissimulation (2020)."
Done
Partly done remove the comma --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"by Nayip Ramos.[19] The music video was" → "by Nayip Ramos and was" since the two sentences are too short to be separate, plus [19] should solely be at the end of the sentence
Done
"The music video was released" → "The video was released"
Done
Not done --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"The video stars both artists and" → "The video stars KSI and Trippie Redd alongside"
Done
Where is the dance troupe mentioned?
Not done it is still there but unsourced
Remove wikilink on costumes
Done
Remove target on behind-the-scenes footage
Done
Not done --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"Speaking about the costumes" → "Discussing the costumes"
Done
""[It was] one" → ""[It was o]ne"
Done
Commercial performance
"was the country's second-most" → "was the second-most"
Done
The number of weeks it spent on the second chart is not mentioned, so just change to writing about the number seven debut
Done
The Hungary and Netherlands positions are top 30, so should be mentioned in the prose
Done
"In Australia, the song" → "Elsewhere, in Australia, the song" since that is a different continent
Done
Is Billboard really needed in the title of the Canadian chart just because the magazine publishes it?
Done
Live performance
Move the live performance to Release and promotion, as this is only one para
Done
Credits and personnel
Songwriter should come before vocals in the credits order
Done
Charts
Are you sure the Australia Hip Hop/R&B chart is notable?
Done
Release history
Good
See also
Good
References
Copyvio score is too high for the Tone Deaf ref; cut down the level of quoting to fix this
Done
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Not done this is about the unreliable Metro refs --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Cite auspOp as publisher instead for ref 36
Done
External links
Good
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but a problem I noticed that is common with your articles is that you did not expand the music and lyrics even when the sources have sufficient info to do so. --
K. Peake 09:21, 8 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen I have gone over where you have missed some things above. --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen You still need to remove the Metro refs and if there aren't any other sources for the info they provide, then delete that. --
K. Peake 15:59, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen Any plans to follow through with the above soon? --
K. Peake 17:03, 14 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen Thank you for removing the bad source; you had left some info there that was not backed up by the other refs but I deleted that since it was merely one sentence and an adjective. ✓Pass now, took a little longer than usual but to your avail evidently! --
K. Peake 18:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)reply
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
Got a few GANs on hold but that is only because users haven't finished their responses yet, so I'll review this. --
K. Peake 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Infobox looks good!
"It is a
pop-rap track. The song's lyrics" → "A
pop-rap track, its lyrics"
Done
"finally accepting KSI's success." → "finally accepting his success."
Done
"and it reached" → "and it further reached"
Done
"Netherlands and New Zealand." → "the Netherlands and New Zealand."
Done
Remove wikilink on costume
Done
Background
Why isn't this or a similar section at the start of the article's body?
Done
Music and lyrics
Verse–chorus form and the length are both unsourced
Not done you have still kept this --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
There is information from
4 and
16 about the music and vocals that can easily be added here; take the chorus, synths and bass for example
Done
"KSI continued," → "He continued,"
Done
Release and promotion
"revealing the song's title as" → "revealing the title as"
Done
Not done you should implement the above version, not an altered one --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"debut studio album, Dissimulation (2020)." → "debut studio album Dissimulation (2020)."
Done
Partly done remove the comma --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"by Nayip Ramos.[19] The music video was" → "by Nayip Ramos and was" since the two sentences are too short to be separate, plus [19] should solely be at the end of the sentence
Done
"The music video was released" → "The video was released"
Done
Not done --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"The video stars both artists and" → "The video stars KSI and Trippie Redd alongside"
Done
Where is the dance troupe mentioned?
Not done it is still there but unsourced
Remove wikilink on costumes
Done
Remove target on behind-the-scenes footage
Done
Not done --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
"Speaking about the costumes" → "Discussing the costumes"
Done
""[It was] one" → ""[It was o]ne"
Done
Commercial performance
"was the country's second-most" → "was the second-most"
Done
The number of weeks it spent on the second chart is not mentioned, so just change to writing about the number seven debut
Done
The Hungary and Netherlands positions are top 30, so should be mentioned in the prose
Done
"In Australia, the song" → "Elsewhere, in Australia, the song" since that is a different continent
Done
Is Billboard really needed in the title of the Canadian chart just because the magazine publishes it?
Done
Live performance
Move the live performance to Release and promotion, as this is only one para
Done
Credits and personnel
Songwriter should come before vocals in the credits order
Done
Charts
Are you sure the Australia Hip Hop/R&B chart is notable?
Done
Release history
Good
See also
Good
References
Copyvio score is too high for the Tone Deaf ref; cut down the level of quoting to fix this
Done
Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
Not done this is about the unreliable Metro refs --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Cite auspOp as publisher instead for ref 36
Done
External links
Good
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but a problem I noticed that is common with your articles is that you did not expand the music and lyrics even when the sources have sufficient info to do so. --
K. Peake 09:21, 8 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen I have gone over where you have missed some things above. --
K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen You still need to remove the Metro refs and if there aren't any other sources for the info they provide, then delete that. --
K. Peake 15:59, 12 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen Any plans to follow through with the above soon? --
K. Peake 17:03, 14 February 2021 (UTC)reply
Timwikisidemen Thank you for removing the bad source; you had left some info there that was not backed up by the other refs but I deleted that since it was merely one sentence and an adjective. ✓Pass now, took a little longer than usual but to your avail evidently! --
K. Peake 18:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)reply