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Reviewer: Schminnte ( talk · contribs) 17:53, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one from WP:CUP/REV. Expect comments soonish. All the best, Schminnte [ talk to me 17:53, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
This new portrait was adapted from an older portrait designed by Bertram Mackennal featured on other British colonial coinage: needs a connective before "featured" - S
in October, 1933,: commas not needed, date commas are only needed for mdy constructions - S
in January, 1934,as above - S
This design was possibly inspired from: should this be "inspired by"? - S
18th century Britishhyphenate 18th-century as it is being used as an adjective - S
clean shavenshould be hyphenated - S
he additionally suggested that the crown motif be shrunk down, and that Nene's cloak be replaced with a topless outfit featuring a piupiu.not seeing a need for a comms, still a single point - S
Coates reviewed the coinage, but was still disappointed by the figures' legs and requested revisions.as above - S
Chief Nene's pipiu was raisedmisspelt and needs italics - S
comprimise: compromise?
with a misspelled "‘WITANGI" above the motifas with caption, reduce from all caps - S
in letter toin a letter to - S
The first order of single crown pieces were shipped to New Zealand"was shipped to" - S
Although criticised by contemporary collectors and numismatists, which I'm unsure on. Presumably this is glossing
There was a general apathy and lack of public interest towards the coinand
The first order of single crown pieces were shipped to New Zealand within unsecured mint bags, resulting in scratching and bag marks on many of the coins. Complaints by the High Commission.... I don't see how this works, as for the first quote this isn't explicitly criticism, and for the second this isn't directly about the coins - S
generally unpopular at releaseis an incorrect gloss of
general apathy and lack of public interest. Unpopular suggests a negative emotion towards the coin, apathy suggests no emotion whatsoever - S
Model by Kruger Gray off a sketch by Berry, featuring the misspelling "WITANGI"is actually a complete sentence; I'm inclined to remove the period. Bit of a gut feeling: thoughts? - S
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Reviewer: Schminnte ( talk · contribs) 17:53, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this one from WP:CUP/REV. Expect comments soonish. All the best, Schminnte [ talk to me 17:53, 7 January 2024 (UTC)
This new portrait was adapted from an older portrait designed by Bertram Mackennal featured on other British colonial coinage: needs a connective before "featured" - S
in October, 1933,: commas not needed, date commas are only needed for mdy constructions - S
in January, 1934,as above - S
This design was possibly inspired from: should this be "inspired by"? - S
18th century Britishhyphenate 18th-century as it is being used as an adjective - S
clean shavenshould be hyphenated - S
he additionally suggested that the crown motif be shrunk down, and that Nene's cloak be replaced with a topless outfit featuring a piupiu.not seeing a need for a comms, still a single point - S
Coates reviewed the coinage, but was still disappointed by the figures' legs and requested revisions.as above - S
Chief Nene's pipiu was raisedmisspelt and needs italics - S
comprimise: compromise?
with a misspelled "‘WITANGI" above the motifas with caption, reduce from all caps - S
in letter toin a letter to - S
The first order of single crown pieces were shipped to New Zealand"was shipped to" - S
Although criticised by contemporary collectors and numismatists, which I'm unsure on. Presumably this is glossing
There was a general apathy and lack of public interest towards the coinand
The first order of single crown pieces were shipped to New Zealand within unsecured mint bags, resulting in scratching and bag marks on many of the coins. Complaints by the High Commission.... I don't see how this works, as for the first quote this isn't explicitly criticism, and for the second this isn't directly about the coins - S
generally unpopular at releaseis an incorrect gloss of
general apathy and lack of public interest. Unpopular suggests a negative emotion towards the coin, apathy suggests no emotion whatsoever - S
Model by Kruger Gray off a sketch by Berry, featuring the misspelling "WITANGI"is actually a complete sentence; I'm inclined to remove the period. Bit of a gut feeling: thoughts? - S