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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Syoung18.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 04:46, 18 January 2022 (UTC) reply

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Peer Review: Really good work. I would suggest, if you could find/access the sources, a section about the lasting affect that this person has had on the culture or what steps have been taken to "reclaim traditional Indian practices through education and literature" because of her work. Also, you could include specifics from her writing or go more in depth about them. Do you know how many copies were sold of her writings or how they were accepted by society? Do you know if her goal was to educate the public or share the Cherokee culture with people similar to her?

In the "Early Life" section you include a part about her needing to conform to the ideals of assimilation BUT also the need to maintain an intellectual connection to traditions. But also in the intro you talk about how acculturation into white society was heavily encouraged, so this seems like kind of a big deal that during this time she was pushed to pursue both. You could talk about the influence that she was exposed to as a child and how this is reflected in the writing. Do you also know how she died?

Your article is very well written and your sources all look good. These are all suggestions and I know sources are hard to find.

Berry2205 ( talk) 19:41, 27 November 2017 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Syoung18.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 04:46, 18 January 2022 (UTC) reply

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Peer Review: Really good work. I would suggest, if you could find/access the sources, a section about the lasting affect that this person has had on the culture or what steps have been taken to "reclaim traditional Indian practices through education and literature" because of her work. Also, you could include specifics from her writing or go more in depth about them. Do you know how many copies were sold of her writings or how they were accepted by society? Do you know if her goal was to educate the public or share the Cherokee culture with people similar to her?

In the "Early Life" section you include a part about her needing to conform to the ideals of assimilation BUT also the need to maintain an intellectual connection to traditions. But also in the intro you talk about how acculturation into white society was heavily encouraged, so this seems like kind of a big deal that during this time she was pushed to pursue both. You could talk about the influence that she was exposed to as a child and how this is reflected in the writing. Do you also know how she died?

Your article is very well written and your sources all look good. These are all suggestions and I know sources are hard to find.

Berry2205 ( talk) 19:41, 27 November 2017 (UTC) reply


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