Tell me why does this sentence "Vow" is a
1994 song written, recorded and produced by
alternative rock band
Garbage and was released as their debut single in early 1995. is constructed like this? Please look at other
GA song articles for a better approach.
Lyrically, Manson claimed ""Vow" is about having feelings [of vengeance]. You have to face your feelings of revenge and work out why you feel that way. It's about that conundrum when you're really angry but in reality you're in a pitiful state. Angry, twisted, but deep down, vulnerable" - a period is missing (at the end)
I'm going to stop here. This article was nominated prematurely, there are far far too many
WP:COMMONWORDs that are linked throughout this article. Also, "Single release" for chart positions/peaks does not follow
WP:ORDINAL at all, there are also many words linked twice (like their debut album). "Commercial track listings" does not follow simple
WP:MoS. Moreover,
File:GarbageVowvideo.JPG does not comply
WP:NFCC its rational is very very weak and does not give a suitable reasoning on why a non-free video shot gives any educational value. I am most certain that
File:GarbageVowInternational.png fails WP:NFCC and I also asked a more experienced user
[1] about it. Also the "Reference" is a mess, publications are not italicized while one title is in capitalization, which is not supposed to be (even if the website presents itself as such). I suggest you fixed all concerns, get it
copy edited, allow others to give it a
WP:PR and then re-nominate. Best,
Jonayo!Selena 4 ever22:57, 27 December 2011 (UTC)reply
Tell me why does this sentence "Vow" is a
1994 song written, recorded and produced by
alternative rock band
Garbage and was released as their debut single in early 1995. is constructed like this? Please look at other
GA song articles for a better approach.
Lyrically, Manson claimed ""Vow" is about having feelings [of vengeance]. You have to face your feelings of revenge and work out why you feel that way. It's about that conundrum when you're really angry but in reality you're in a pitiful state. Angry, twisted, but deep down, vulnerable" - a period is missing (at the end)
I'm going to stop here. This article was nominated prematurely, there are far far too many
WP:COMMONWORDs that are linked throughout this article. Also, "Single release" for chart positions/peaks does not follow
WP:ORDINAL at all, there are also many words linked twice (like their debut album). "Commercial track listings" does not follow simple
WP:MoS. Moreover,
File:GarbageVowvideo.JPG does not comply
WP:NFCC its rational is very very weak and does not give a suitable reasoning on why a non-free video shot gives any educational value. I am most certain that
File:GarbageVowInternational.png fails WP:NFCC and I also asked a more experienced user
[1] about it. Also the "Reference" is a mess, publications are not italicized while one title is in capitalization, which is not supposed to be (even if the website presents itself as such). I suggest you fixed all concerns, get it
copy edited, allow others to give it a
WP:PR and then re-nominate. Best,
Jonayo!Selena 4 ever22:57, 27 December 2011 (UTC)reply