"that was the first
skyscraper in the city" — unlink skyscraper, linked in lead.
Its customary to link in lead and then once in the body.♦
Dr. Blofeld 08:39, 26 June 2012 (UTC)reply
"The first major office building to be constructed on the Georgetown waterfront in 50 years,[34] it formerly housed the Henry J. Kaufman advertising firm" — new sentence in middle?
No, the citation is in the middle of sentence after the comma.
Works from the 1970s
"By the end of 1975, the New York Times was reporting that Koubek's firm had designed roughly half the office buildings built in the District of Columbia since the 1950s" — link NYT article fully; The New York Times.
if you look at the pipe link it already does this.
The Willard renovation
Critic Paul Goldberger, writing for New York Times declared the renovation ingenious" — {{when}}?
1986. Added
Other 1970s projects
Grand.
Works of the 1980s
"He also designed Shockoe Plaza (now known as Shockoe Slip), a seven-building ..." ⇒ "He also designed Shockoe Slip (formerly Shockoe Plaza), a seven-building ..."
Changed.
Final works
Fine.
Other activities
" In 1990, Czechoslovakian President Václav Havel appointed Koubek to a ..." — delink
Czechoslovakian President, no need.
Changed.
Later years and death
Grand.
Design philosophy
Fine.
Legacy
Bit of a list, could be rewritten.
Well, it is a list of notable works really so I think its appropriate.
I shall put this on hold until the issues above have been addressed. Thanks! ⇒
TAP 18:28, 25 June 2012 (UTC)reply
"that was the first
skyscraper in the city" — unlink skyscraper, linked in lead.
Its customary to link in lead and then once in the body.♦
Dr. Blofeld 08:39, 26 June 2012 (UTC)reply
"The first major office building to be constructed on the Georgetown waterfront in 50 years,[34] it formerly housed the Henry J. Kaufman advertising firm" — new sentence in middle?
No, the citation is in the middle of sentence after the comma.
Works from the 1970s
"By the end of 1975, the New York Times was reporting that Koubek's firm had designed roughly half the office buildings built in the District of Columbia since the 1950s" — link NYT article fully; The New York Times.
if you look at the pipe link it already does this.
The Willard renovation
Critic Paul Goldberger, writing for New York Times declared the renovation ingenious" — {{when}}?
1986. Added
Other 1970s projects
Grand.
Works of the 1980s
"He also designed Shockoe Plaza (now known as Shockoe Slip), a seven-building ..." ⇒ "He also designed Shockoe Slip (formerly Shockoe Plaza), a seven-building ..."
Changed.
Final works
Fine.
Other activities
" In 1990, Czechoslovakian President Václav Havel appointed Koubek to a ..." — delink
Czechoslovakian President, no need.
Changed.
Later years and death
Grand.
Design philosophy
Fine.
Legacy
Bit of a list, could be rewritten.
Well, it is a list of notable works really so I think its appropriate.
I shall put this on hold until the issues above have been addressed. Thanks! ⇒
TAP 18:28, 25 June 2012 (UTC)reply