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The result was: promoted by
Kingsif (
talk) 20:27, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
... that Sudanese art was fuelling the revolution of 2018/19? Source: Elhassan, Sara (21 February 2019). "How Sudanese art is fueling the revolution". OkayAfrica.
Created by
Munfarid1 (
talk). Self-nominated at 15:27, 8 May 2021 (UTC).
Substantial overview full of details, on excellent sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I see a problem in having such a broad range to pick a short snappy thing from, but confess that none of the hooks leaves me happy. What I like best in the first suggestion is that the piping is moderate, while in both others, it borders Easter egg. As a reader, I would want to reach a woman's bio when clicking her name, not this broad thing. In the first hook, there's no history, - perhaps one item to hint at that could be added? ... that while ??? in the history, in the 21st century it fueled revolution? - Perhaps a completely different fact, or two? If not, I can approve the original. I trust that there will be architecture when it appears ;) --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 12:40, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
I forgot the minor thingy that one ref misses a title. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 12:54, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
I added three more hooks, taking you up on your suggestion. - And the title issue is fixed, thanks for pointing it out.
Munfarid1 (
talk) 19:19, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
ALT1.0: ... that Sudanese art never received much attention in Western media, until a new generation of artists arrived and fueled the revolution of 2018/19? Source: Elhassan, Sara (21 February 2019). "How Sudanese art is fueling the revolution". OkayAfrica.
ALT4: ... that Modern Art in Sudan was thriving from the 1960s up to the 80s, but was suppressed for almost 40 years, until its revival in the
Sudanese Revolution? Source: as ALT1
Thank you for the offers which I like much better. Let's see if we can streamline a bit.
ALT1.1: ... that Sudanese art received attention in Western media when a new generation of artists fueled the
revolution of 2018/19?
What do you think? Main page readers don't want to study ;) - I think ALT3 is fine but not as strong as the others--
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 20:02, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
Thanks, I prefer ALT4.0, hoping that it will attract people's attention. It's always a pleasure to read your comments! And BTW: I will do a QPQ in time to make up for this DYK nomination.
Munfarid1 (
talk) 21:07, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
This is an archive of past discussions. Do not edit the contents of this page. If you wish to start a new discussion or revive an old one, please do so on the
current talk page.
The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
this nomination's talk page,
the article's talk page or
Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by
Kingsif (
talk) 20:27, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
... that Sudanese art was fuelling the revolution of 2018/19? Source: Elhassan, Sara (21 February 2019). "How Sudanese art is fueling the revolution". OkayAfrica.
Created by
Munfarid1 (
talk). Self-nominated at 15:27, 8 May 2021 (UTC).
Substantial overview full of details, on excellent sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I see a problem in having such a broad range to pick a short snappy thing from, but confess that none of the hooks leaves me happy. What I like best in the first suggestion is that the piping is moderate, while in both others, it borders Easter egg. As a reader, I would want to reach a woman's bio when clicking her name, not this broad thing. In the first hook, there's no history, - perhaps one item to hint at that could be added? ... that while ??? in the history, in the 21st century it fueled revolution? - Perhaps a completely different fact, or two? If not, I can approve the original. I trust that there will be architecture when it appears ;) --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 12:40, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
I forgot the minor thingy that one ref misses a title. --
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 12:54, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
I added three more hooks, taking you up on your suggestion. - And the title issue is fixed, thanks for pointing it out.
Munfarid1 (
talk) 19:19, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
ALT1.0: ... that Sudanese art never received much attention in Western media, until a new generation of artists arrived and fueled the revolution of 2018/19? Source: Elhassan, Sara (21 February 2019). "How Sudanese art is fueling the revolution". OkayAfrica.
ALT4: ... that Modern Art in Sudan was thriving from the 1960s up to the 80s, but was suppressed for almost 40 years, until its revival in the
Sudanese Revolution? Source: as ALT1
Thank you for the offers which I like much better. Let's see if we can streamline a bit.
ALT1.1: ... that Sudanese art received attention in Western media when a new generation of artists fueled the
revolution of 2018/19?
What do you think? Main page readers don't want to study ;) - I think ALT3 is fine but not as strong as the others--
Gerda Arendt (
talk) 20:02, 12 May 2021 (UTC)
Thanks, I prefer ALT4.0, hoping that it will attract people's attention. It's always a pleasure to read your comments! And BTW: I will do a QPQ in time to make up for this DYK nomination.
Munfarid1 (
talk) 21:07, 12 May 2021 (UTC)