"Some of the New York recordings, released on bootleg recordings, have a faster tempo, and in the fifth verse contain the additional line "He examines the nightingale's code". " - maybe "Some of the New York recordings, released as bootlegs, were uptempo and contain in the fifth verse the additional line "He examines the nightingale's code".
"listened closely to full studio tapes of the Blonde on Blonde sessions, and he describes how Dylan guided the New York backing musicians through fourteen takes" - reads better imho
"Wilentz writes that the final, quieter New York takes are close in feel to the Nashville version which appears on the album.[5]" - Can you rewrite it? It sounds a little bit odd.
Why do we need "(another character in the song)" if this was already explained?
Oops, that was my mistake. I had missed that Mick gold had already talked about Louise earlier on. I have now removed "another character in the son".
Moisejp (
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15:54, 7 November 2011 (UTC)reply
It is the first time I see an audio file in an infobox.
"
Like a Rolling Stone" has the audio file in the info box, and it seems to me I've seen it elsewhere as well. I've tentatively moved it out of the info box if you quite prefer it that way. But if you didn't really mind it in the info box, I thought the page layout was less cluttered with it there.
Moisejp (
talk)
15:54, 7 November 2011 (UTC)reply
Much better now, especially as it is so big. Now it is a GA! Congrats ;) !
"Some of the New York recordings, released on bootleg recordings, have a faster tempo, and in the fifth verse contain the additional line "He examines the nightingale's code". " - maybe "Some of the New York recordings, released as bootlegs, were uptempo and contain in the fifth verse the additional line "He examines the nightingale's code".
"listened closely to full studio tapes of the Blonde on Blonde sessions, and he describes how Dylan guided the New York backing musicians through fourteen takes" - reads better imho
"Wilentz writes that the final, quieter New York takes are close in feel to the Nashville version which appears on the album.[5]" - Can you rewrite it? It sounds a little bit odd.
Why do we need "(another character in the song)" if this was already explained?
Oops, that was my mistake. I had missed that Mick gold had already talked about Louise earlier on. I have now removed "another character in the son".
Moisejp (
talk)
15:54, 7 November 2011 (UTC)reply
It is the first time I see an audio file in an infobox.
"
Like a Rolling Stone" has the audio file in the info box, and it seems to me I've seen it elsewhere as well. I've tentatively moved it out of the info box if you quite prefer it that way. But if you didn't really mind it in the info box, I thought the page layout was less cluttered with it there.
Moisejp (
talk)
15:54, 7 November 2011 (UTC)reply
Much better now, especially as it is so big. Now it is a GA! Congrats ;) !