Under 'Background and writing', it says, "the band wrote the first line and the first little melody of the song years ago but did not finish it until last year." In five weeks, this sentence will be out of date—best to write it as "did not finish it until 2007".
Reference number one doesn't back up the quote. For source seven,
this will work better to cite the interview. Under 'Music and lyrics' in the second paragraph, source eleven doesn't back up the first sentence. Source number fifteen doesn't work. The line "'Violet Hill' received its first radio play on 29 April 2008, on Radio 1 at 12:13." is unsourced and trivial. Under 'Release and promotion', the last line of the second paragraph isn't backed up by the source. Source number nineteen isn't really needed, as source number twenty backs up both claims. Source twenty tells us the peak of the song, not necessarily that the song entered at number nine on the Hot Modern Rock Tracks. Sources number twenty-four and twenty-five are forums and are not reliable sources. Under 'Music videos', source number eight does not back up that the video was directed by
Asa Mader. What makes source thirty-eight (themodernage.org) reliable?
Under 'Background and writing', it says, "the band wrote the first line and the first little melody of the song years ago but did not finish it until last year." In five weeks, this sentence will be out of date—best to write it as "did not finish it until 2007".
Reference number one doesn't back up the quote. For source seven,
this will work better to cite the interview. Under 'Music and lyrics' in the second paragraph, source eleven doesn't back up the first sentence. Source number fifteen doesn't work. The line "'Violet Hill' received its first radio play on 29 April 2008, on Radio 1 at 12:13." is unsourced and trivial. Under 'Release and promotion', the last line of the second paragraph isn't backed up by the source. Source number nineteen isn't really needed, as source number twenty backs up both claims. Source twenty tells us the peak of the song, not necessarily that the song entered at number nine on the Hot Modern Rock Tracks. Sources number twenty-four and twenty-five are forums and are not reliable sources. Under 'Music videos', source number eight does not back up that the video was directed by
Asa Mader. What makes source thirty-eight (themodernage.org) reliable?