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Limelightangel ( talk) 17:23, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
The title convention here and elsewhere is for italics and capitalization, with no painter name in brackets unless there are identically named paintings by different artists (see 'Virgin on the Rocks', 'Mona Lisa', 'The Hay Wain', etc.)."
In addition to the convention on Wikipedia for other paintings, see also: Wikipedia:Naming_conventions_(works_of_art) , specifically: "Use common name when feasible. Articles on works of art should be titled by the work’s common names, like other topics. Works of art that have official names usually use that name as the article title, (italicized, e.g. The Artist as Hephaestus) unless some other name is more common." It has been fixed by adding at the top of the page markup - do not delete this. Limelightangel ( talk) 17:29, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
LIUC7Mariasole03 ( talk) 12:15, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
The page needs an Infobox. There are a range of different Infobox templates for pages on paintings, including a general one Template:Infobox_artwork, and ones for specific types of art. There may other options. Have a look at: Wikipedia:List_of_infoboxes. You can see how it has been used on other pages about paintings by inspecting the markup (Edit) on these pages e.g. Mona_Lisa. It is not necessary to complete all the fields in this template. There are predefined rules for the content you can add to each field in the template. See the Infobox help at: Help:Infobox Limelightangel ( talk) 12:20, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
Venus and Cupid with a Honeycomb | |
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Artist | Cranach Lucas also knwon as Cranach The Eldest |
Year | 1520 |
Subject | Venus, Cupid and the honeycomb |
Dimensions | 169 cm × 67 cm (67 in × 26 in) |
Location | Villa Borghese, Rome |
Latitude: 41.9085 Longitude: 12.4887. |
LIUC7Mariasole03 ( talk) 16:33, 18 November 2022 (UTC) LIUC7Martina12 ( talk) 16:33, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
I have changed some info in the Infobox and added the picture. LIUC7Andrea21 ( talk) 12:33, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:45, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
There is a repetition in the description of the latin epigraph - it's already explained in the subsection "Mythological background". It should be deleted by its author. LIUC7Andrea21 ( talk) 22:06, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
I wouldn't put Cranach's picture in the introduction LIUC7Andrea21 ( talk) 17:46, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 20:25, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Please advise your students to follow some of the basic rules outlined in the Manual of Style, especially those on bolding, duplicate links, and overlinked terms. They have also removed valid citation needed tags from statements without providing a source. I've been reverting quite a few of their edits over the past few hours and see that there's still hundreds that need to be checked for compliance. SounderBruce 10:41, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. I will reinforce this with them, be having meetings with them to review their recent work and the many issues. They have repeatedly had this advice but clearly need it emphasizing. Thanks for the feedback. Limelightangel (talk) 14:47, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 11:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
LIUC7Mariasole03 ( talk) 15:52, 6 December 2022 (UTC)
Overlinking: I have fixed the problem of too many links. User:LIUC7Pietro03 ( talk) 09:52, 9 December 2022 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 31.188.158.128 ( talk)
Do you find all the categories relevant? Are we missing some? LIUC7Valerija05 ( talk) 19:28, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
Refs. 6 and 7 could reference the original sources, not where you found them i.e. not Scholar or Google Books Limelightangel ( talk) 11:28, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
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This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(Autumn_2022) The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student User names are:
Limelightangel ( talk) 17:23, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
The title convention here and elsewhere is for italics and capitalization, with no painter name in brackets unless there are identically named paintings by different artists (see 'Virgin on the Rocks', 'Mona Lisa', 'The Hay Wain', etc.)."
In addition to the convention on Wikipedia for other paintings, see also: Wikipedia:Naming_conventions_(works_of_art) , specifically: "Use common name when feasible. Articles on works of art should be titled by the work’s common names, like other topics. Works of art that have official names usually use that name as the article title, (italicized, e.g. The Artist as Hephaestus) unless some other name is more common." It has been fixed by adding at the top of the page markup - do not delete this. Limelightangel ( talk) 17:29, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
LIUC7Mariasole03 ( talk) 12:15, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
The page needs an Infobox. There are a range of different Infobox templates for pages on paintings, including a general one Template:Infobox_artwork, and ones for specific types of art. There may other options. Have a look at: Wikipedia:List_of_infoboxes. You can see how it has been used on other pages about paintings by inspecting the markup (Edit) on these pages e.g. Mona_Lisa. It is not necessary to complete all the fields in this template. There are predefined rules for the content you can add to each field in the template. See the Infobox help at: Help:Infobox Limelightangel ( talk) 12:20, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
Venus and Cupid with a Honeycomb | |
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Artist | Cranach Lucas also knwon as Cranach The Eldest |
Year | 1520 |
Subject | Venus, Cupid and the honeycomb |
Dimensions | 169 cm × 67 cm (67 in × 26 in) |
Location | Villa Borghese, Rome |
Latitude: 41.9085 Longitude: 12.4887. |
LIUC7Mariasole03 ( talk) 16:33, 18 November 2022 (UTC) LIUC7Martina12 ( talk) 16:33, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
I have changed some info in the Infobox and added the picture. LIUC7Andrea21 ( talk) 12:33, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:45, 21 November 2022 (UTC)
There is a repetition in the description of the latin epigraph - it's already explained in the subsection "Mythological background". It should be deleted by its author. LIUC7Andrea21 ( talk) 22:06, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
I wouldn't put Cranach's picture in the introduction LIUC7Andrea21 ( talk) 17:46, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 20:25, 26 November 2022 (UTC)
Please advise your students to follow some of the basic rules outlined in the Manual of Style, especially those on bolding, duplicate links, and overlinked terms. They have also removed valid citation needed tags from statements without providing a source. I've been reverting quite a few of their edits over the past few hours and see that there's still hundreds that need to be checked for compliance. SounderBruce 10:41, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Many thanks. I will reinforce this with them, be having meetings with them to review their recent work and the many issues. They have repeatedly had this advice but clearly need it emphasizing. Thanks for the feedback. Limelightangel (talk) 14:47, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 11:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
LIUC7Mariasole03 ( talk) 15:52, 6 December 2022 (UTC)
Overlinking: I have fixed the problem of too many links. User:LIUC7Pietro03 ( talk) 09:52, 9 December 2022 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 31.188.158.128 ( talk)
Do you find all the categories relevant? Are we missing some? LIUC7Valerija05 ( talk) 19:28, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
Refs. 6 and 7 could reference the original sources, not where you found them i.e. not Scholar or Google Books Limelightangel ( talk) 11:28, 8 December 2022 (UTC)