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Reviewer: Go Phightins! ( talk · contribs) 04:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this page. Go Phightins ! 04:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
*Is there any way to consolidate his three positions so it doesn't take up so many lines?
*The lead mentions a different record than the infobox...it says that he holds the career record for kickoff return yards whereas the infobox says that he holds the career (active) record. Which is it?
*Mention where Klein Forest H.S. is in that sentence.
Satisfied with this section.
That's all I've got right now. I'm assuming there are no free images of him on the Commons? Go Phightins ! 04:46, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
All right, I'm still a little concerned that the lead doesn't give a terrific preview of the article, but other than that, this looks excellent.
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Reviewer: Go Phightins! ( talk · contribs) 04:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this page. Go Phightins ! 04:25, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
*Is there any way to consolidate his three positions so it doesn't take up so many lines?
*The lead mentions a different record than the infobox...it says that he holds the career record for kickoff return yards whereas the infobox says that he holds the career (active) record. Which is it?
*Mention where Klein Forest H.S. is in that sentence.
Satisfied with this section.
That's all I've got right now. I'm assuming there are no free images of him on the Commons? Go Phightins ! 04:46, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
All right, I'm still a little concerned that the lead doesn't give a terrific preview of the article, but other than that, this looks excellent.
Go
Phightins
!
01:40, 3 January 2013 (UTC)