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Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 ( talk · contribs) 18:32, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
I'm gonna review this article. Stay tuned.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 18:32, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: Okay, then. Sorry, mea culpa. I was extremely busy. So. The article looks fine. Just:
""Hanae makes full use of all the cool, uncool, and sexy parts to bring out the charm of Vanitas". Maybe 'he tried to make' is better.
Thats' all.
@ TeenAngels1234: Thanks for the comments. Tintor2 ( talk) 22:12, 4 August 2022 (UTC) @ TeenAngels1234: I trimmed the appearanes section. Tell me if it should be smaller. Tintor2 ( talk) 01:17, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: That's all. Good work.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 10:17, 7 August 2022 (UTC) @ TeenAngels1234: Done. Tintor2 ( talk) 14:26, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 ( talk · contribs) 18:32, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
I'm gonna review this article. Stay tuned.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 18:32, 28 July 2022 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: Okay, then. Sorry, mea culpa. I was extremely busy. So. The article looks fine. Just:
""Hanae makes full use of all the cool, uncool, and sexy parts to bring out the charm of Vanitas". Maybe 'he tried to make' is better.
Thats' all.
@ TeenAngels1234: Thanks for the comments. Tintor2 ( talk) 22:12, 4 August 2022 (UTC) @ TeenAngels1234: I trimmed the appearanes section. Tell me if it should be smaller. Tintor2 ( talk) 01:17, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
@ Tintor2: That's all. Good work.-- TeenAngels1234 ( talk) 10:17, 7 August 2022 (UTC) @ TeenAngels1234: Done. Tintor2 ( talk) 14:26, 7 August 2022 (UTC)