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Praseodymium-141: I will take on the review, however, it will take me awhile to read the whole article.
Thanks for taking up the review! I might not be very free over the next few weeks, so I might take some time to respond to comments. 141Pr {
contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)reply
General comments
From GAR, combine all the subsections at the section 'Occurrence', and try to make it more smooth flowing between them.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 04:30, 7 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Is this written in British or American English? I saw the word 'colour' in the compounds section which is a British English word.
I have fixed the issues that I could find. If there is any I missed, please can you point it out to me so I can fix it? 141Pr {
contribs} 11:48, 8 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Would be nice if you specified which dialect of English it is on in the talk page.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 13:53, 9 April 2023 (UTC)reply
In the alloy section, 'aluminium' is British-English, replace with 'aluminum'. There is two times that this happens in this section, change accordingly.
Perhaps too many images in the Production section, maybe remove one image.
Done: Removed etched piece of vanadium. 141Pr {
contribs} 16:21, 11 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Facts
The phrase 'It is oxidized in air at about 933 K (660 °C, 1220 °F), although an oxide passivation layer forms even at room temperature.' is unreferenced.
The phrase 'Electron capture is the main decay mode for isotopes lighter than 51V. For the heavier ones, the most common mode is beta decay. The electron capture reactions lead to the formation of element 22 (titanium) isotopes, while beta decay leads to element 24 (chromium) isotopes.' is unreferenced too.
Same problem here: 'Vanadic acid, H3VO4 exists only at very low concentrations because protonation of the tetrahedral species [H2VO4]− results in the preferential formation of the octahedral [VO2(H2O)4]+ species. In strongly acidic solutions, pH < 2, [VO2(H2O)4]+ is the predominant species, while the oxide V2O5 precipitates from solution at high concentrations. The oxide is formally the acid anhydride of vanadic acid. The structures of many vanadate compounds have been determined by X-ray crystallography.'
Sorry for the late responses, I have been working on my own GAN, but I am free now. Here are some more comments.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 15:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Second paragraph of the oxyanion section still looks unreferenced.
I don't have access to most of the refs, so I don't know if I'll be able to do this one... 141Pr {
contribs} 07:38, 19 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Some of them are journal articles, the page number should be there freely available when you click on the doi link.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 13:43, 19 April 2023 (UTC)reply
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Praseodymium-141: I see that the refs have been cleaned up by another person. I don't see any more issues, so I will pass this article.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 23:22, 19 April 2023 (UTC)reply
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Praseodymium-141: I will take on the review, however, it will take me awhile to read the whole article.
Thanks for taking up the review! I might not be very free over the next few weeks, so I might take some time to respond to comments. 141Pr {
contribs} 07:49, 8 April 2023 (UTC)reply
General comments
From GAR, combine all the subsections at the section 'Occurrence', and try to make it more smooth flowing between them.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 04:30, 7 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Is this written in British or American English? I saw the word 'colour' in the compounds section which is a British English word.
I have fixed the issues that I could find. If there is any I missed, please can you point it out to me so I can fix it? 141Pr {
contribs} 11:48, 8 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Would be nice if you specified which dialect of English it is on in the talk page.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 13:53, 9 April 2023 (UTC)reply
In the alloy section, 'aluminium' is British-English, replace with 'aluminum'. There is two times that this happens in this section, change accordingly.
Perhaps too many images in the Production section, maybe remove one image.
Done: Removed etched piece of vanadium. 141Pr {
contribs} 16:21, 11 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Facts
The phrase 'It is oxidized in air at about 933 K (660 °C, 1220 °F), although an oxide passivation layer forms even at room temperature.' is unreferenced.
The phrase 'Electron capture is the main decay mode for isotopes lighter than 51V. For the heavier ones, the most common mode is beta decay. The electron capture reactions lead to the formation of element 22 (titanium) isotopes, while beta decay leads to element 24 (chromium) isotopes.' is unreferenced too.
Same problem here: 'Vanadic acid, H3VO4 exists only at very low concentrations because protonation of the tetrahedral species [H2VO4]− results in the preferential formation of the octahedral [VO2(H2O)4]+ species. In strongly acidic solutions, pH < 2, [VO2(H2O)4]+ is the predominant species, while the oxide V2O5 precipitates from solution at high concentrations. The oxide is formally the acid anhydride of vanadic acid. The structures of many vanadate compounds have been determined by X-ray crystallography.'
Sorry for the late responses, I have been working on my own GAN, but I am free now. Here are some more comments.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 15:47, 16 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Second paragraph of the oxyanion section still looks unreferenced.
I don't have access to most of the refs, so I don't know if I'll be able to do this one... 141Pr {
contribs} 07:38, 19 April 2023 (UTC)reply
Some of them are journal articles, the page number should be there freely available when you click on the doi link.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 13:43, 19 April 2023 (UTC)reply
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Praseodymium-141: I see that the refs have been cleaned up by another person. I don't see any more issues, so I will pass this article.
Keres🌕Lunaedits! 23:22, 19 April 2023 (UTC)reply