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I removed non-NPOV text from the introduction:
and from the Game Design section:
If anyone can source these comments appropriately, feel free to do so, and add them back in with improved grammar. I also removed the caption text regarding Japanese publisher Riot's logo appearing on the building in the background from the screenshot; I don't think it's needed. Landauer 16:02, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
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BetacommandBot ( talk) 12:53, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
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Based. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 10:17, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
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OK, that's all for now. Let me know when finished making changes, and I will take another look, and also will look at the lead next time. One thing I would do with the lead is push the mention of the ports/versions down to the second or third paragraph. There's so many versions, that the first several lines are just about different versions before actually explaining what the game is about. Just open up with the original platforms for 1986, then explain what the game is about. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 01:10, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
@ KGRAMR: You write that a Telenet superior came in complaining about the graphics, then the project was discontinued.
Ikegame later quit his job at Telenet. How later? if pretty soon after because of this game, omit 'later', but if his quitting was much later and unrelated to this project, then omit this entirely.
TarkusAB talk/ contrib 01:03, 13 May 2023 (UTC)
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I removed non-NPOV text from the introduction:
and from the Game Design section:
If anyone can source these comments appropriately, feel free to do so, and add them back in with improved grammar. I also removed the caption text regarding Japanese publisher Riot's logo appearing on the building in the background from the screenshot; I don't think it's needed. Landauer 16:02, 12 July 2006 (UTC)
Image:Valis riot.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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BetacommandBot ( talk) 12:51, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
Image:Valis1.jpg is being used on this article. I notice the image page specifies that the image is being used under fair use but there is no explanation or rationale as to why its use in this Wikipedia article constitutes fair use. In addition to the boilerplate fair use template, you must also write out on the image description page a specific explanation or rationale for why using this image in each article is consistent with fair use.
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BetacommandBot ( talk) 12:53, 21 January 2008 (UTC)
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Reviewer: TarkusAB ( talk · contribs) 10:17, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
Based. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 10:17, 30 April 2023 (UTC)
Gameplay and premise
Development
Release
Reception
OK, that's all for now. Let me know when finished making changes, and I will take another look, and also will look at the lead next time. One thing I would do with the lead is push the mention of the ports/versions down to the second or third paragraph. There's so many versions, that the first several lines are just about different versions before actually explaining what the game is about. Just open up with the original platforms for 1986, then explain what the game is about. TarkusAB talk/ contrib 01:10, 10 May 2023 (UTC)
@ KGRAMR: You write that a Telenet superior came in complaining about the graphics, then the project was discontinued.
Ikegame later quit his job at Telenet. How later? if pretty soon after because of this game, omit 'later', but if his quitting was much later and unrelated to this project, then omit this entirely.
TarkusAB talk/ contrib 01:03, 13 May 2023 (UTC)