The prose is generally very good (probably better than I could do). However, there are some minor grammar and MoS issues. First, should you mention in the lead that the road is in Utah? In the sentence, State Route 279 was constructed in 1962-3, "1962-3" should be "1962–1963", with an en dash instead of a hypen. Also, in the sentence, While in the colorado river canyon..., "Colorado River" should be capitalized.
Wow thanks for the fast review, and the kind words. I believe I have addressed your concerns, as well as fixed a couple of minor errors I just notices. Please advise if you have additional concerns.
Dave (
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23:28, 8 June 2008 (UTC)reply
The prose is generally very good (probably better than I could do). However, there are some minor grammar and MoS issues. First, should you mention in the lead that the road is in Utah? In the sentence, State Route 279 was constructed in 1962-3, "1962-3" should be "1962–1963", with an en dash instead of a hypen. Also, in the sentence, While in the colorado river canyon..., "Colorado River" should be capitalized.
Wow thanks for the fast review, and the kind words. I believe I have addressed your concerns, as well as fixed a couple of minor errors I just notices. Please advise if you have additional concerns.
Dave (
talk)
23:28, 8 June 2008 (UTC)reply