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DarjeelingTea:
How should I go about your prose maintenance tag? I feel both sections are good in lists (I do agree, though, that two lists is not necessarily aesthetically pleasing). Is the tag talking to both
Media Coverage and
Districts, or just one?
I'm not DarjeelingTea -- though I do drink tea -- but in my personal opinion, the media coverage section needs turning into prose in summary style, whereas the Districts part is fine. For some reason, the "reception" sections commonly seen in film articles sprang to my mind when thinking how the media coverage section might be better written. For an example, take a look at
Balls Out (2014 film)#Critical reception. A better matching example would be some other innovation (ancient or modern) that received widespread coverage and both praise and criticism, but I can't think of a good example right now.
MPS1992 (
talk)
20:30, 18 March 2017 (UTC)reply
Utah Girls Football League (
final version) received a
peer review by Wikipedia editors, which on 1 December 2021 was archived. It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject American football, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
American football on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.American footballWikipedia:WikiProject American footballTemplate:WikiProject American footballAmerican football articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Women's sport (and women in sports), a WikiProject which aims to improve coverage of women in sports on Wikipedia. For more information, visit the
project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the
discussion.Women's sportWikipedia:WikiProject Women's sportTemplate:WikiProject Women's sportWomen's sport articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the
United States of America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions.
@
DarjeelingTea:
How should I go about your prose maintenance tag? I feel both sections are good in lists (I do agree, though, that two lists is not necessarily aesthetically pleasing). Is the tag talking to both
Media Coverage and
Districts, or just one?
I'm not DarjeelingTea -- though I do drink tea -- but in my personal opinion, the media coverage section needs turning into prose in summary style, whereas the Districts part is fine. For some reason, the "reception" sections commonly seen in film articles sprang to my mind when thinking how the media coverage section might be better written. For an example, take a look at
Balls Out (2014 film)#Critical reception. A better matching example would be some other innovation (ancient or modern) that received widespread coverage and both praise and criticism, but I can't think of a good example right now.
MPS1992 (
talk)
20:30, 18 March 2017 (UTC)reply