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I would like to suggest that we have the Urdu [and/Farsi] text of poetry alongside the translation. This could be in English script or in Urdu. English might be better. What say?-- iFaqeer 03:42, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
nice Kawishpoetry ( talk) 02:41, 4 July 2020 (UTC)
We are now officially in danger of getting into a firefight.
The sentence:
Has lots of issues:
-- iFaqeer 21:11, Sep 14, 2004 (UTC)
-- LordSuryaofShropshire 21:19, Sep 14, 2004 (UTC)
Thing is, one doesn't have to be an Urdu-speaker for Urdu poets to be influenced by him, no? And believe me, we speakers and writers in the language are.
Though I find the statement that he speaks shuddha Hindi a little odd. If I am not mistaken, most of his work is in something closer to Brij Bhasha/Purabi/etc. and very understandable (more so than Doordarshan newscasts, I think!) to an Urdu speaker. And we love him!
In either case, in terms of how old things are, Khusro is definitely one of the oldest influences anyway.-- iFaqeer 21:56, Sep 14, 2004 (UTC)
I've taken some of the info from this page and a couple of other wiki-pages, and used it to add some info to the penname article, trying to make it less-exclusively European in outlook. Since I really don't know Urdu poetry, could someone take a look at what I wrote to make sure that it makes sense. (The haiku/haiga stuff I also wrote, but I do know Japanese poetry). [[User:GK|gK ¿?]] 10:33, 20 Nov 2004 (UTC)
Below is my explanation for including Arabic Language.
Urdu Sami Buneri ( talk) 18:10, 26 June 2018 (UTC)
Poetry is an output of overcome of emotions direct from heart 💜💜 Shrivastav h ( talk) 17:33, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
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Rohit762014 ( talk) 14:25, 19 July 2020 (UTC)
रखी थी उमीद जिससे🤦♀️..!! हर शख्स बदलता गया🤷♀️,, मेरे गुरूर का सूरज🖼, मेरे सामने ढलता गया👵 !!.
Rakhi Thi Umeed Jisse Har Shakhs Badalta Gaya Mere Guroor Ka Suraj Mere Saamne Dhalta Gaya .
मंजर भी बेनूर थे ,फिजाएं भी बेरंग थी !! बस तुम याद आए ,ऑर मौसम सुहाना हो गया ।।
Manjar Bhi Benur The, Fizayen Bhi Berang Thi Bas Tum Yaad Aye ,Or Mausam Suhana Ho Gaya .!!
Bookku ( talk) 11:23, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
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the word rich in the first sentence may seem biased, remove "rich" 39.50.170.61 ( talk) 12:09, 8 October 2021 (UTC)
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I would like to suggest that we have the Urdu [and/Farsi] text of poetry alongside the translation. This could be in English script or in Urdu. English might be better. What say?-- iFaqeer 03:42, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)
nice Kawishpoetry ( talk) 02:41, 4 July 2020 (UTC)
We are now officially in danger of getting into a firefight.
The sentence:
Has lots of issues:
-- iFaqeer 21:11, Sep 14, 2004 (UTC)
-- LordSuryaofShropshire 21:19, Sep 14, 2004 (UTC)
Thing is, one doesn't have to be an Urdu-speaker for Urdu poets to be influenced by him, no? And believe me, we speakers and writers in the language are.
Though I find the statement that he speaks shuddha Hindi a little odd. If I am not mistaken, most of his work is in something closer to Brij Bhasha/Purabi/etc. and very understandable (more so than Doordarshan newscasts, I think!) to an Urdu speaker. And we love him!
In either case, in terms of how old things are, Khusro is definitely one of the oldest influences anyway.-- iFaqeer 21:56, Sep 14, 2004 (UTC)
I've taken some of the info from this page and a couple of other wiki-pages, and used it to add some info to the penname article, trying to make it less-exclusively European in outlook. Since I really don't know Urdu poetry, could someone take a look at what I wrote to make sure that it makes sense. (The haiku/haiga stuff I also wrote, but I do know Japanese poetry). [[User:GK|gK ¿?]] 10:33, 20 Nov 2004 (UTC)
Below is my explanation for including Arabic Language.
Urdu Sami Buneri ( talk) 18:10, 26 June 2018 (UTC)
Poetry is an output of overcome of emotions direct from heart 💜💜 Shrivastav h ( talk) 17:33, 18 October 2021 (UTC)
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Rohit762014 ( talk) 14:25, 19 July 2020 (UTC)
रखी थी उमीद जिससे🤦♀️..!! हर शख्स बदलता गया🤷♀️,, मेरे गुरूर का सूरज🖼, मेरे सामने ढलता गया👵 !!.
Rakhi Thi Umeed Jisse Har Shakhs Badalta Gaya Mere Guroor Ka Suraj Mere Saamne Dhalta Gaya .
मंजर भी बेनूर थे ,फिजाएं भी बेरंग थी !! बस तुम याद आए ,ऑर मौसम सुहाना हो गया ।।
Manjar Bhi Benur The, Fizayen Bhi Berang Thi Bas Tum Yaad Aye ,Or Mausam Suhana Ho Gaya .!!
Bookku ( talk) 11:23, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
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the word rich in the first sentence may seem biased, remove "rich" 39.50.170.61 ( talk) 12:09, 8 October 2021 (UTC)