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I spent a good deal of time on the overhaul and I hope it is well-received. However, I'll be the first to say that there are still many issues with the article. My main goal was to get us back to a solid base article that is easy to expand. To reach this point, I removed many unsourced statements, irrelevant sections, peacocking/POV comments, and other problematic content. The new version is smaller, but everything that is there is, I hope, notable and sourced (or source-able).
As we continue to improve the article, please, please source everything you add, and keep things neutral, accurate, and notable. Thanks! MaxVeers ( talk) 00:50, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
This is an encyclopedia, not a news article... to that end, and per wikipedia guidelines, articles should neutral and encyclopedic in nature and tone. To wit:
Endogenous -i ( talk) 03:57, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
I think it better to stick to the smaller, original text and work from there.
I struggle to see how the details of this case are notable enough for inclusion, but let's see. I don't feel Endogenous -i's three-point note above has enough detail - only the Waves/ACLU issue is specifically mentioned and the rest is general opinion. Let's hear some specifics, please.
Ewen ( talk) 15:36, 17 December 2009 (UTC)
I am new to all of this. However, wikipedia is too difficult to use. If you have to read extensive comments about how to properly edit Wikipedia you ruin its purpose. Not everyone has the time. At the beginning of THIS page someone states Wiki's purpose is NOT to be an aggregate source of news. I deleted the assault charges because they fail to fit the category of what Upper St. Clair is about. Including news stories about USC is absurd. Why is this any more relevant than including USC's incoming and outgoing teachers? Why not include the minutes of PTA meetings every week? Again, I am deleting this content for a very valid reason. Its not vandalism. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 157.182.98.90 ( talk) 21:51, 27 January 2011 (UTC)
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To-do list for Upper St. Clair High School:
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I spent a good deal of time on the overhaul and I hope it is well-received. However, I'll be the first to say that there are still many issues with the article. My main goal was to get us back to a solid base article that is easy to expand. To reach this point, I removed many unsourced statements, irrelevant sections, peacocking/POV comments, and other problematic content. The new version is smaller, but everything that is there is, I hope, notable and sourced (or source-able).
As we continue to improve the article, please, please source everything you add, and keep things neutral, accurate, and notable. Thanks! MaxVeers ( talk) 00:50, 21 August 2009 (UTC)
This is an encyclopedia, not a news article... to that end, and per wikipedia guidelines, articles should neutral and encyclopedic in nature and tone. To wit:
Endogenous -i ( talk) 03:57, 7 December 2009 (UTC)
I think it better to stick to the smaller, original text and work from there.
I struggle to see how the details of this case are notable enough for inclusion, but let's see. I don't feel Endogenous -i's three-point note above has enough detail - only the Waves/ACLU issue is specifically mentioned and the rest is general opinion. Let's hear some specifics, please.
Ewen ( talk) 15:36, 17 December 2009 (UTC)
I am new to all of this. However, wikipedia is too difficult to use. If you have to read extensive comments about how to properly edit Wikipedia you ruin its purpose. Not everyone has the time. At the beginning of THIS page someone states Wiki's purpose is NOT to be an aggregate source of news. I deleted the assault charges because they fail to fit the category of what Upper St. Clair is about. Including news stories about USC is absurd. Why is this any more relevant than including USC's incoming and outgoing teachers? Why not include the minutes of PTA meetings every week? Again, I am deleting this content for a very valid reason. Its not vandalism. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 157.182.98.90 ( talk) 21:51, 27 January 2011 (UTC)
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