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Reviewer: TBrandley ( talk · contribs) 22:09, 7 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Issues:

• Overall: There might not be too much "meat" in the article. So it may need to be expanded in some ways. I'm going to ask for a 2nd opinion.

Other than that. There are no other problems. Thanks, TBran dl ey 22:12, 7 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Comments by Hahc21

• I'm afraid this article doesn't meet the completeness guideline (2.a)
• Also, the references are not up to standard. I see some capitalized publishers, titles and misspellings, typos, etc.
• So, i think this article should be properly expanded before reaching GA status. The nominator may use Sticky & Sweet Tour as an example of the layout and information that this type of articles may have.

— Hahc 21 00:39, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Actually I did look at the Sticky Tour and Monster Ball Tour and I know the concert is divided in four segments (summer, autumn etc. so i could make a concert synopsis) however I could not find any sources for it and thus it be would orginal research. I can expand background critical reception, DVD release and of course rearrange the layout AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 02:33, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Great, If you need any help, just leave me a message at my TP. Maybe i can find some sources to help you out (although it may be reason enough for a fail). Cheers! — Hahc 21 02:44, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply

That is what I thought. Per the above, thanks for your help, Hahc21. TBran dl ey 03:01, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Always glad to help. Regards. — Hahc 21 03:09, 8 July 2012 (UTC) reply

You guys can fail this, I don't think I can expand enough in due time and not planning to in given period. Thanks for the advice. Regards AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 02:21, 9 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Well, we can close it as not listed and then you can work calmly on it and eventually nominate it later :). I'm prettu sure it will reach GA status soon. I will take a look to see if i can help giving you sources. Cheers! — Hahc 21 03:43, 9 July 2012 (UTC) reply

That would be great, and yes as much sources possible, Regards AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 13:24, 9 July 2012 (UTC) reply

I have expanded :) AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 17:18, 9 July 2012 (UTC) reply

I have expanded critical, broadcasting, background can it pass now? AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 23:12, 9 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Great! Let me do some final tweaks on the article body. You must expand the lead to properly cover the new information you added. Meanwhile, i will be checking the references to verify format and stuff. Cheers! — Hahc 21 01:15, 10 July 2012 (UTC) reply

okay :D, copying lead from Madonna Sticky tour as of now. AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 01:51, 10 July 2012 (UTC) reply

does the new lead summarize the article well enough AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 05:58, 10 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Yeah, I think so. Good work on expanding the article. TBran dl ey 16:32, 10 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Thanks AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 17:32, 10 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Adabow, just asking: Have you found anything about the show? I mean, if there's divided into acts, which things they do while singing, the clothes they wore, how the scenario was designed? [just asking]? It doesn't matter if you didn't found it, since that would mean that that info doesn't exist. — Hahc 21 06:15, 11 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Having watched the concert synopsis on youtube, they only stand on stage and sing further no special effects or back dancers or special routines. Every 4 or 5 songs they change clothes and after every 4 songs the backdrop (the screen) changes to winter, summer or autumn. Reviewers do state this in their reviews although not well enough. I know the opening sequence is called "Summer Hols" and I could not find any sources for it. There isn't enough sources to make proper concert synopsis I guess. AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 16:11, 11 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Does the article meet GA with the info given AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 16:23, 11 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Mmm i think it may, but i leave that to Brandley, as he is the one to make the final choice. Cheers! — Hahc 21 16:42, 11 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Thanks for your time and advice. Regards AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 16:52, 11 July 2012 (UTC) reply

I take a look at the new article by tomorrow. TBran dl ey 16:54, 11 July 2012 (UTC) reply

I will pass now. Good work! TBran dl ey 19:24, 15 July 2012 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the advice and for passing it ;D. Regards AdabowtheSecond ( talk) 19:50, 15 July 2012 (UTC) reply