I'm afraid this article doesn't meet the completeness guideline (2.a)
Also, the references are not up to standard. I see some capitalized publishers, titles and misspellings, typos, etc.
So, i think this article should be properly expanded before reaching GA status. The nominator may use
Sticky & Sweet Tour as an example of the layout and information that this type of articles may have.
Actually I did look at the Sticky Tour and
Monster Ball Tour and I know the concert is divided in four segments (summer, autumn etc. so i could make a concert synopsis) however I could not find any sources for it and thus it be would orginal research. I can expand background critical reception, DVD release and of course rearrange the layout
AdabowtheSecond (
talk)
02:33, 8 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Great, If you need any help, just leave me a message at my TP. Maybe i can find some sources to help you out (although it may be reason enough for a fail). Cheers! —
Hahc2102:44, 8 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Well, we can close it as not listed and then you can work calmly on it and eventually nominate it later :). I'm prettu sure it will reach GA status soon. I will take a look to see if i can help giving you sources. Cheers! —
Hahc2103:43, 9 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Great! Let me do some final tweaks on the article body. You must expand the lead to properly cover the new information you added. Meanwhile, i will be checking the references to verify format and stuff. Cheers! —
Hahc2101:15, 10 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Adabow, just asking: Have you found anything about the show? I mean, if there's divided into acts, which things they do while singing, the clothes they wore, how the scenario was designed? [just asking]? It doesn't matter if you didn't found it, since that would mean that that info doesn't exist. —
Hahc2106:15, 11 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Having watched the concert synopsis on youtube, they only stand on stage and sing further no special effects or back dancers or special routines. Every 4 or 5 songs they change clothes and after every 4 songs the backdrop (the screen) changes to winter, summer or autumn. Reviewers do state this in their reviews although not well enough. I know the opening sequence is called "Summer Hols" and I could not find any sources for it. There isn't enough sources to make proper concert synopsis I guess.
AdabowtheSecond (
talk)
16:11, 11 July 2012 (UTC)reply
I'm afraid this article doesn't meet the completeness guideline (2.a)
Also, the references are not up to standard. I see some capitalized publishers, titles and misspellings, typos, etc.
So, i think this article should be properly expanded before reaching GA status. The nominator may use
Sticky & Sweet Tour as an example of the layout and information that this type of articles may have.
Actually I did look at the Sticky Tour and
Monster Ball Tour and I know the concert is divided in four segments (summer, autumn etc. so i could make a concert synopsis) however I could not find any sources for it and thus it be would orginal research. I can expand background critical reception, DVD release and of course rearrange the layout
AdabowtheSecond (
talk)
02:33, 8 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Great, If you need any help, just leave me a message at my TP. Maybe i can find some sources to help you out (although it may be reason enough for a fail). Cheers! —
Hahc2102:44, 8 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Well, we can close it as not listed and then you can work calmly on it and eventually nominate it later :). I'm prettu sure it will reach GA status soon. I will take a look to see if i can help giving you sources. Cheers! —
Hahc2103:43, 9 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Great! Let me do some final tweaks on the article body. You must expand the lead to properly cover the new information you added. Meanwhile, i will be checking the references to verify format and stuff. Cheers! —
Hahc2101:15, 10 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Adabow, just asking: Have you found anything about the show? I mean, if there's divided into acts, which things they do while singing, the clothes they wore, how the scenario was designed? [just asking]? It doesn't matter if you didn't found it, since that would mean that that info doesn't exist. —
Hahc2106:15, 11 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Having watched the concert synopsis on youtube, they only stand on stage and sing further no special effects or back dancers or special routines. Every 4 or 5 songs they change clothes and after every 4 songs the backdrop (the screen) changes to winter, summer or autumn. Reviewers do state this in their reviews although not well enough. I know the opening sequence is called "Summer Hols" and I could not find any sources for it. There isn't enough sources to make proper concert synopsis I guess.
AdabowtheSecond (
talk)
16:11, 11 July 2012 (UTC)reply