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Reviewer: Grandiose ( talk · contribs) 17:02, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
I'll be taking this review.
I can see you've listed the article for a copyedit; however, on review I do think that there are large amounts of information missing in the article. I looked for articles for comparison and I think University of the Philippines Los Baños is a good fit. You can see how the successive sections - which are quite comparable between articles in terms of how the content has been divided – Academia, Student life, research people - ought to be threshed out. I've marked a couple of sections in "history" that need expansion, but they could be merged together and each expanded to a paragraph. Generally the other sections are short and this is a concern under the criteria. I'm going away for a week and will review progress after. As a guide, I think the overall length of the article could be as much as doubled; at least 50% more is necessary to give the reader enough information on the topic (we shall see). Grandiose ( me, talk, contribs) 18:36, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Grandiose ( talk · contribs) 17:02, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
I'll be taking this review.
I can see you've listed the article for a copyedit; however, on review I do think that there are large amounts of information missing in the article. I looked for articles for comparison and I think University of the Philippines Los Baños is a good fit. You can see how the successive sections - which are quite comparable between articles in terms of how the content has been divided – Academia, Student life, research people - ought to be threshed out. I've marked a couple of sections in "history" that need expansion, but they could be merged together and each expanded to a paragraph. Generally the other sections are short and this is a concern under the criteria. I'm going away for a week and will review progress after. As a guide, I think the overall length of the article could be as much as doubled; at least 50% more is necessary to give the reader enough information on the topic (we shall see). Grandiose ( me, talk, contribs) 18:36, 29 June 2012 (UTC)