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I think you have made a decent start to your article. I personally would like to see your section current regulations be more impactful. What are the impacts of the regulations you mentioned? What other impacts are there? Did you think about looking by US region (like Great Lakes vs Atlantic) and whether there are different regulations between those regions? Also, does regulation depend on the size or purpose of the source? Just a few questions I had after reading the current article. Over all I like your start. Can't wait to see what else you come up with. Jthebooknerd87 ( talk) 18:27, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
You may change the article title into: United States Point Source Water Pollution Regulations to reduce duplication. I also think you need to focus more on domestic point source water pollution instead of focusing on foreign experiences. If possible, you can add one section about domestic regulations. huiyao ( talk) 21:34, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
I also think you need to divide up your regulation section into U.S. and international. Having the international paragraph between sections on U.S. regulations is a bit confusing and keeps the article from reading right. I'm also curious about the history of pswp - maybe go into why it's important to have these policies (prevention of disease, environmental quality), especially since the article is about point source water pollution, not just the policies related to it (although those are our focus) Bkmertz ( talk) 03:00, 10 April 2011 (UTC)
You guys have the start of a good article here with a solid outline and background to go off of. Here are a few (unfortunately some repeated) suggestions:
Good Luck! TrueBlueWolverine ( talk) 15:38, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
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I think you have made a decent start to your article. I personally would like to see your section current regulations be more impactful. What are the impacts of the regulations you mentioned? What other impacts are there? Did you think about looking by US region (like Great Lakes vs Atlantic) and whether there are different regulations between those regions? Also, does regulation depend on the size or purpose of the source? Just a few questions I had after reading the current article. Over all I like your start. Can't wait to see what else you come up with. Jthebooknerd87 ( talk) 18:27, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
You may change the article title into: United States Point Source Water Pollution Regulations to reduce duplication. I also think you need to focus more on domestic point source water pollution instead of focusing on foreign experiences. If possible, you can add one section about domestic regulations. huiyao ( talk) 21:34, 9 April 2011 (UTC)
I also think you need to divide up your regulation section into U.S. and international. Having the international paragraph between sections on U.S. regulations is a bit confusing and keeps the article from reading right. I'm also curious about the history of pswp - maybe go into why it's important to have these policies (prevention of disease, environmental quality), especially since the article is about point source water pollution, not just the policies related to it (although those are our focus) Bkmertz ( talk) 03:00, 10 April 2011 (UTC)
You guys have the start of a good article here with a solid outline and background to go off of. Here are a few (unfortunately some repeated) suggestions:
Good Luck! TrueBlueWolverine ( talk) 15:38, 18 April 2011 (UTC)
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