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I do not currently have the energy to edit this myself, but the recent additions about Bruce Tap read more like a review of his book than a series of well integrated comments about the committee itself. Hal Jespersen 17:44, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
I was referring to the style of writing, not the selection of the reference. Hal Jespersen 19:32, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
I have no major disagreement with Tap, but don't see a reason those direct quotes belong in this article. Out of context, I'm not sure what they add. In any case, Tap doesn't deserve one third of the article space as is. Do we all agree this subject deserves some future attention? BusterD 01:43, 19 January 2006 (UTC)
I think if you read Russell Beatie's Army of the Potomac series, particularly "McClellan Takes Command", you'd get a very different view of the CCW. I think this article, as it stands now, is awfully biased in favor of the CWW. 155.219.241.12 17:37, 6 August 2006 (UTC)
The article has References and Notes, but needs inline citations to meet Wiki standards. (btw, that may help resolve some of the above discussion)... Engr105th ( talk) 05:41, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
The opening paragraph of the article, within each of its three sentences, has a decided prejudicial tone not in keeping with the notions of neutrality that I understood to be Wiki standard. As valid as some criticisms may be, they are better proven by annotated evidence than by unsubstantiated opinion and they are better made mention only by conjecture in an introductory paragraph with conclusions reserved for a more detailed discussion with appropriate citations. I make no direct edit at this time but am willing to suggest substitute language. - Zanski ( talk) 20:19, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
Well, three years later, little has changed. I've added an NPOV tag to the article, because I am not knowledgeable enough about the subject to improve the article myself. HamartiaProsciuttoPharos ( talk) 20:44, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
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I do not currently have the energy to edit this myself, but the recent additions about Bruce Tap read more like a review of his book than a series of well integrated comments about the committee itself. Hal Jespersen 17:44, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
I was referring to the style of writing, not the selection of the reference. Hal Jespersen 19:32, 16 January 2006 (UTC)
I have no major disagreement with Tap, but don't see a reason those direct quotes belong in this article. Out of context, I'm not sure what they add. In any case, Tap doesn't deserve one third of the article space as is. Do we all agree this subject deserves some future attention? BusterD 01:43, 19 January 2006 (UTC)
I think if you read Russell Beatie's Army of the Potomac series, particularly "McClellan Takes Command", you'd get a very different view of the CCW. I think this article, as it stands now, is awfully biased in favor of the CWW. 155.219.241.12 17:37, 6 August 2006 (UTC)
The article has References and Notes, but needs inline citations to meet Wiki standards. (btw, that may help resolve some of the above discussion)... Engr105th ( talk) 05:41, 28 March 2012 (UTC)
The opening paragraph of the article, within each of its three sentences, has a decided prejudicial tone not in keeping with the notions of neutrality that I understood to be Wiki standard. As valid as some criticisms may be, they are better proven by annotated evidence than by unsubstantiated opinion and they are better made mention only by conjecture in an introductory paragraph with conclusions reserved for a more detailed discussion with appropriate citations. I make no direct edit at this time but am willing to suggest substitute language. - Zanski ( talk) 20:19, 15 March 2016 (UTC)
Well, three years later, little has changed. I've added an NPOV tag to the article, because I am not knowledgeable enough about the subject to improve the article myself. HamartiaProsciuttoPharos ( talk) 20:44, 24 April 2019 (UTC)