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I would like to move this article to "United Nations Confidence Restoration Operation in Croatia"
The proposed new title is the official title of the UN mission as indicated by numerous sources, such as
I am aware that the most common form of reference to the mission is the acronym, but based on the UNTAES article talk the acronym would not be an acceptable title (except as a redirect). The proposed article title has an added virtue that it is not only official but also disambiguating. Any thoughts?-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 08:52, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 12:22, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Fine. |
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | OK |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | OK |
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7. Overall assessment. | Listed, well done. |
Comments
Placing on hold for seven days for these matters to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( send... over) 12:20, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
There is an overcited sentence within this article:
The UNCRO was initially deployed to the same areas as the UNPROFOR in Croatia, however the relevant UNSC documents no longer referred to them as UNPAs—applying designations of Sector East, West, North and South, or "areas under the control of the local Serb authorities" instead
This sentence concerns me because the readers could be mislead to believe that areas under protection of UN did not exist after establishment of the UNCRO although numerous sources, many of them authored and published by UN, actually do refer to this areas of Croatia as UN protected. The nominator and me have already discussed this issue at the Operation Flash talkpage ( link) in March 2013. Instead of resolving that disagreement by consensus the nominator wrote above sentence according to his point of view which I believe is based on his interpretation of the primary sources (five UNSC resolutions are cited). I think that perhaps this might be a possible violation of WP:CFORK and WP:OR which should be taken care of. -- Antidiskriminator ( talk) 15:44, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
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I would like to move this article to "United Nations Confidence Restoration Operation in Croatia"
The proposed new title is the official title of the UN mission as indicated by numerous sources, such as
I am aware that the most common form of reference to the mission is the acronym, but based on the UNTAES article talk the acronym would not be an acceptable title (except as a redirect). The proposed article title has an added virtue that it is not only official but also disambiguating. Any thoughts?-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 08:52, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 12:22, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | |
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2c. it contains no original research. | |
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | Fine. |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | OK |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | OK |
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7. Overall assessment. | Listed, well done. |
Comments
Placing on hold for seven days for these matters to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( send... over) 12:20, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
There is an overcited sentence within this article:
The UNCRO was initially deployed to the same areas as the UNPROFOR in Croatia, however the relevant UNSC documents no longer referred to them as UNPAs—applying designations of Sector East, West, North and South, or "areas under the control of the local Serb authorities" instead
This sentence concerns me because the readers could be mislead to believe that areas under protection of UN did not exist after establishment of the UNCRO although numerous sources, many of them authored and published by UN, actually do refer to this areas of Croatia as UN protected. The nominator and me have already discussed this issue at the Operation Flash talkpage ( link) in March 2013. Instead of resolving that disagreement by consensus the nominator wrote above sentence according to his point of view which I believe is based on his interpretation of the primary sources (five UNSC resolutions are cited). I think that perhaps this might be a possible violation of WP:CFORK and WP:OR which should be taken care of. -- Antidiskriminator ( talk) 15:44, 20 June 2013 (UTC)