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Reviewer: Sawyer-mcdonell ( talk · contribs) 19:49, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
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while others claim that it derive from Kimbundu language meaning “medicine” or “healing”.
In Umbanda, it is usual for a medium to determine the identity of a person's spirit patrons. This is different from Candomblé, where the identity is more often ascertained through forms of divination; divination in general plays much less of a role in Umbanda than in Candomblé.(from section "relationships with the orixás") - this is confusing to me; what is the difference between a medium determining the patrons versus using divination to determine them? could use clarification here.
As spirits, they are considered to be "highly evolved".(from section "Caboclos") - the section about Caboclos is in the "lesser evolved spirits" section; does "lesser evolved" in this context mean "evolved spirits that are lesser" or "spirits that are less evolved" ?
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Thanks, Sawyer-mcdonell. Did you have any other points that you wanted me to address? Midnightblueowl ( talk) 21:39, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
The social activities common among Brazil's Christian churches are largely absent from Umbandist centros.What kinds of social activities?
@ Midnightblueowl I've completed my review, including source spotchecks, which all turned up well. Congrats! sawyer * he/they * talk 19:31, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sawyer-mcdonell ( talk · contribs) 19:49, 1 March 2024 (UTC)
Well-written
Verifiable with no original research
while others claim that it derive from Kimbundu language meaning “medicine” or “healing”.
In Umbanda, it is usual for a medium to determine the identity of a person's spirit patrons. This is different from Candomblé, where the identity is more often ascertained through forms of divination; divination in general plays much less of a role in Umbanda than in Candomblé.(from section "relationships with the orixás") - this is confusing to me; what is the difference between a medium determining the patrons versus using divination to determine them? could use clarification here.
As spirits, they are considered to be "highly evolved".(from section "Caboclos") - the section about Caboclos is in the "lesser evolved spirits" section; does "lesser evolved" in this context mean "evolved spirits that are lesser" or "spirits that are less evolved" ?
Broad in its coverage
Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each
Passed
Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing
edit war or content dispute
Passed
Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio
Thanks, Sawyer-mcdonell. Did you have any other points that you wanted me to address? Midnightblueowl ( talk) 21:39, 4 March 2024 (UTC)
The social activities common among Brazil's Christian churches are largely absent from Umbandist centros.What kinds of social activities?
@ Midnightblueowl I've completed my review, including source spotchecks, which all turned up well. Congrats! sawyer * he/they * talk 19:31, 6 March 2024 (UTC)