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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 18:32, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
All in all a very interesting article. I made quite a few edits, mostly fixing little things. [1] If I changed the meaning of the article in any way, please feel free to revert. (Captions that aren't complete sentences aren't supposed to have a ending period.)
What does "detonated low-order" and "TF 54" mean?
How does extreme beam differ from Beam (nautical)?
How does mean draft differ from Draft (hull)?
There seems to be too much detail in places:
Suggest you remove this image as it's quality isn't very good and there are plenty of better ones in the article already. It would help to have that one removed.
Vreeken is used quite a bit as a source. I'll accept on good faith that you have phrased everything in your own words. I know there are only so many ways to say certain things.
Do you think all those red links will have articles? e.g. stood out?
Will put on hold to await your response.
MathewTownsend ( talk) 19:07, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
Good work. Congratulations! MathewTownsend ( talk) 14:22, 16 July 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend ( talk · contribs) 18:32, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
All in all a very interesting article. I made quite a few edits, mostly fixing little things. [1] If I changed the meaning of the article in any way, please feel free to revert. (Captions that aren't complete sentences aren't supposed to have a ending period.)
What does "detonated low-order" and "TF 54" mean?
How does extreme beam differ from Beam (nautical)?
How does mean draft differ from Draft (hull)?
There seems to be too much detail in places:
Suggest you remove this image as it's quality isn't very good and there are plenty of better ones in the article already. It would help to have that one removed.
Vreeken is used quite a bit as a source. I'll accept on good faith that you have phrased everything in your own words. I know there are only so many ways to say certain things.
Do you think all those red links will have articles? e.g. stood out?
Will put on hold to await your response.
MathewTownsend ( talk) 19:07, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)
Good work. Congratulations! MathewTownsend ( talk) 14:22, 16 July 2012 (UTC)