GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: LanceBarber ( talk · contribs) 06:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
Recommend the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs have their own section "Overview"... add two subsection break names for pre-WWII history,for 1929-30 and the earthquake... the Battle of the Coral Sea Section have further subsections to separate the different days' actions, Task Force 11 details, the military outcome, and the significance of the "draw" of battle for the Allies... also add a short paragraph at the end telling about the survivors being rescued by the USS Fletcher(needs verafication) and more info on the USS Phelps actions(paragraph ended a little abruptly). [Side note, my uncle was a survivor and not until the 1990s did he finally talk of the Battle. The CV-2 Association has transferred all its history, recovered material before sinking, and memorabilia to the USS Lexington Museum at Corpus Christi.] LanceBarber ( talk) 06:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
Since it appears Lance has abandoned the review, I'll take it over and complete it in the next few days if he doesn't return in that time. Parsecboy ( talk) 20:55, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
Turns out my class today was cancelled, so I've got time today for this.
All done. Thanks for taking over the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:41, 4 March 2012 (UTC)
GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (
|
visual edit |
history) ·
Article talk (
|
history) ·
Watch
Reviewer: LanceBarber ( talk · contribs) 06:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
Recommend the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs have their own section "Overview"... add two subsection break names for pre-WWII history,for 1929-30 and the earthquake... the Battle of the Coral Sea Section have further subsections to separate the different days' actions, Task Force 11 details, the military outcome, and the significance of the "draw" of battle for the Allies... also add a short paragraph at the end telling about the survivors being rescued by the USS Fletcher(needs verafication) and more info on the USS Phelps actions(paragraph ended a little abruptly). [Side note, my uncle was a survivor and not until the 1990s did he finally talk of the Battle. The CV-2 Association has transferred all its history, recovered material before sinking, and memorabilia to the USS Lexington Museum at Corpus Christi.] LanceBarber ( talk) 06:36, 11 February 2012 (UTC)
Since it appears Lance has abandoned the review, I'll take it over and complete it in the next few days if he doesn't return in that time. Parsecboy ( talk) 20:55, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
Turns out my class today was cancelled, so I've got time today for this.
All done. Thanks for taking over the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 23:41, 4 March 2012 (UTC)