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Reviewer: Tomobe03 ( talk · contribs) 16:58, 13 May 2013 (UTC)
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... took part in a large-scale battle exercises ...is it one exercise or more - either the indefinite article or the plural suffix must go.
On 24 December 1943, the task group was caught in a storm in the North Atlantic when at 01:58, Leary made a ping on a U-Boat off her starboard bow.is not clear, at least to me - is it am or pm?
Interesting article. I think there are no further issues relevant to the GAR.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 10:12, 14 May 2013 (UTC)
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MOS issues:
Referencing:
Prose:
... took part in a large-scale battle exercises ...is it one exercise or more - either the indefinite article or the plural suffix must go.
On 24 December 1943, the task group was caught in a storm in the North Atlantic when at 01:58, Leary made a ping on a U-Boat off her starboard bow.is not clear, at least to me - is it am or pm?
Interesting article. I think there are no further issues relevant to the GAR.-- Tomobe03 ( talk) 10:12, 14 May 2013 (UTC)