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Limelightangel ( talk) 20:25, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
The page has now been resubmitted with the addition of secondary sources. Liuc11Anders ( talk) 10:40, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
The images used on this page has been added to the following category on Wikimedia Commons: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Permission_pending_as_of_10_December_2023
While the images are still pending permission the page will be submitted for review. Be more than welcome to provide any information that can help improve this if needed. Liuc11Anders ( talk) 17:26, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:32, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 20:30, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
Merge together info from "Colors" and "Colors and badge", also "Anthem" with "Anthem and mascot", what is the best solution? -- Rednax11 ( talk) 13:41, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
For help adding the pronunciation of the football clubs name --> IPA, in the intro. Rednax11 ( talk) 16:35, 15 November 2023 (UTC).
In an official document from the football club it says the full name of the football club is "Unione Sportiva Dilettantistica Castellanzese 1921 Associazione Sportiva Dilettantistica". [1] -- Rednax11 ( talk) 00:44, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
References
This is their official web page where they have a lot of info. Might be a good source. This is the link https://www.castellanzese.com/organigramma/ Liuc11Anders ( talk) 17:07, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
For results and transfers, som useful sources are: https://www.flashscore.dk/hold/castellanzese/p2vpBK0t/ or https://www.tuttocampo.it/Italia/SerieD/GironeB/Squadra/Castellanzese1921/930022/Scheda LIUC11Nicolai ( talk) 15:030, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
For the infobox, there is the need to add the logo image. It could be also interesting adding the uniform photos (home colours, away colors). Like this one /info/en/?search=AC_Milan Liuc11nicole ( talk) 17:37, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
1. There is help on football Club pages as part of Wikipedia Football Clubs Project: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Football/Clubs/Templates, including a page to help on Italian clubs: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Football/Clubs/Templates/Italy
2. For the infobox: https://en.wikipedia.org › wiki › Template:Infobox_fo... This has predefined fields and Parameters, including club name; year the club was founded; The commonly-used name of the club; ground — with examples.
3. Wikipedia:WikiProject Football/Templates https://en.wikipedia.org › wiki › Templates For most major clubs and national teams, there are navboxes for the current squad that can be inserted at the foot of a player's biography, including Squad lists. Limelightangel ( talk) 15:16, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
@ Liuc11nicole: Note the guidelines on Talk page use, including style, structuring the discusions and signing all posts: Help:Talk_pages. Avoid the personal tense where possible ('I', 'we') and inappropriate language ('gonna'). Talk is visible to other editors, so it needs to be clear who is saying what, and 'we' will mean nothing to them. To sign posts you can use the 1 click option below the editor space, or simply add the 4 '~' symbols manually. You can edit Talk pages to correct your content. Limelightangel ( talk) 09:36, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
The following paragraph is irrelevant to the topic: "Castellanza is a town located in the province of Varese and bordering Busto Arsizio and Legnano (MI). During this period it faced constraints on the development of both cultural and sports activities, as well as leisure pursuits. Nevertheless, despite these limitations, passionate and volunteer citizens are making immense efforts to initiate local endeavors. Currently, fundraising is challenging as the disappearance of large companies, has resulted in the absence of patrons who traditionally financed various activities. It belongs on the page on Castellanza and does not directly relate to USD Castellanzese. It also contains inappropriate style e.g. 'neverthless', incorrect tense, subjectivity ('passionate', 'immense'). It also has no references for any of the content. Limelightangel ( talk) 09:42, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
The following paragraph has:
During those years, the USD Castellanzese included sections dedicated to cycling (the predominant activity due to the founders' boundless passion for the sport), with some presence in athletics, soccer, a motorcycle club, (which had 248 members in 1950), and finally, table tennis. It is essential to mention the names of those who were the founders of this club: the fisrt person is Giuseppe Scandrolio, the founder father, who was supported by key collaborators such as Ercole Airoldi, Alfredo Gamassi, Umberto Baita, and Pierino Albini. See: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style Limelightangel ( talk) 09:57, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
Maybe collect the sentences under one topic, and put into one paragraph rather than having three sentences on each row?
Rednax11 (
talk)
01:30, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
See: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Linking
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:22, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
https://www.castellanzese.com/wp-content/uploads/STATUTO-CASTELLANZESE-201502.pdf Liuc11Chiara ( talk) 15:02, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
https://www.castellanzese.com/le-strutture/ Liuc11Chiara ( talk) 15:19, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
The section: "history" contains too much directly translation and does not add up for corrensponding rules of wikipedia, therefor it needs to be rephrased Liuc11Anders ( talk) 13:23, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
When the pictures are avaliable add an image of the supports logo LIUC11Nicolai ( talk) 16:07, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
The youth sector was accidently cut off but it will be fixed later. Please do not do anything to it Liuc11Anders ( talk) 11:08, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
Useful links to create the pattern of the football kit:
/info/en/?search=Template:Football_kit/pattern_list#Stripes
https://neroverdestore.castellanzese.com/
/info/en/?search=Template:Football_kit ~~~~ Liuc11nicole ( talk) 15:59, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Infobox was added by User:Luic1clement Rednax11 ( talk) 14:19, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Is has been sorted by combining the whole period from 1970-present instead
Fixed
Fixed
Changed tense in text. Rednax11 ( talk) 14:18, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
"were in very familiar" has been changed
Removed duplicate links. Rednax11 ( talk) 15:49, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Modification of paragraph "1920 to 1930" to introduce the Union Sportiva Castellanzese. Luic1clement ( talk) 17:02, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Modification "Black-green president" into "the USD Castellanzese president". Luic1clement ( talk) 17:02, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Added translation to "Sogno neroverde" Rednax11 ( talk) 14:17, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Link improvement. Luic1clement ( talk) 17:02, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Review of grammar errors done. Luic1clement ( talk) 16:31, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Review of grammar errors done. Luic1clement ( talk) 16:31, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Review of the dates format. Luic1clement ( talk) 16:31, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Lyrics of the anthem changed to italics. Rednax11 ( talk) 15:38, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:15, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
sponsors external links Liuc11Chiara ( talk) 14:16, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Useful link for dates and numbers:
/info/en/?search=Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Dates_and_numbers Liuc11nicole ( talk) 18:34, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Fixed for now, but may need continuous improvement as pictures are added
Done
Fixed - Now all have text and not URL
Youtube link has been deleted since it is not known if it is free to use or not La rassegna stampa needs a clear linked name, not a URL;
Added the right format to the links to USD Castellanzese. Rednax11 ( talk) 16:40, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
Added "in italian" to references. Rednax11 ( talk) 15:36, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
Has been added
Fixed
dublicates fixed
Fixed
Has been changed
link out made
Incorrect linkout removed
Fixed
This article is rated C-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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This article is currently the subject of an educational assignment. Further details are available [ [1]]. |
This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(Autumn_2023)/home . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:
Limelightangel ( talk) 20:25, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
The page has now been resubmitted with the addition of secondary sources. Liuc11Anders ( talk) 10:40, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
The images used on this page has been added to the following category on Wikimedia Commons: https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Permission_pending_as_of_10_December_2023
While the images are still pending permission the page will be submitted for review. Be more than welcome to provide any information that can help improve this if needed. Liuc11Anders ( talk) 17:26, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:32, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 20:30, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
Merge together info from "Colors" and "Colors and badge", also "Anthem" with "Anthem and mascot", what is the best solution? -- Rednax11 ( talk) 13:41, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
For help adding the pronunciation of the football clubs name --> IPA, in the intro. Rednax11 ( talk) 16:35, 15 November 2023 (UTC).
In an official document from the football club it says the full name of the football club is "Unione Sportiva Dilettantistica Castellanzese 1921 Associazione Sportiva Dilettantistica". [1] -- Rednax11 ( talk) 00:44, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
References
This is their official web page where they have a lot of info. Might be a good source. This is the link https://www.castellanzese.com/organigramma/ Liuc11Anders ( talk) 17:07, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
For results and transfers, som useful sources are: https://www.flashscore.dk/hold/castellanzese/p2vpBK0t/ or https://www.tuttocampo.it/Italia/SerieD/GironeB/Squadra/Castellanzese1921/930022/Scheda LIUC11Nicolai ( talk) 15:030, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
For the infobox, there is the need to add the logo image. It could be also interesting adding the uniform photos (home colours, away colors). Like this one /info/en/?search=AC_Milan Liuc11nicole ( talk) 17:37, 14 November 2023 (UTC)
1. There is help on football Club pages as part of Wikipedia Football Clubs Project: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Football/Clubs/Templates, including a page to help on Italian clubs: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Football/Clubs/Templates/Italy
2. For the infobox: https://en.wikipedia.org › wiki › Template:Infobox_fo... This has predefined fields and Parameters, including club name; year the club was founded; The commonly-used name of the club; ground — with examples.
3. Wikipedia:WikiProject Football/Templates https://en.wikipedia.org › wiki › Templates For most major clubs and national teams, there are navboxes for the current squad that can be inserted at the foot of a player's biography, including Squad lists. Limelightangel ( talk) 15:16, 16 November 2023 (UTC)
@ Liuc11nicole: Note the guidelines on Talk page use, including style, structuring the discusions and signing all posts: Help:Talk_pages. Avoid the personal tense where possible ('I', 'we') and inappropriate language ('gonna'). Talk is visible to other editors, so it needs to be clear who is saying what, and 'we' will mean nothing to them. To sign posts you can use the 1 click option below the editor space, or simply add the 4 '~' symbols manually. You can edit Talk pages to correct your content. Limelightangel ( talk) 09:36, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
The following paragraph is irrelevant to the topic: "Castellanza is a town located in the province of Varese and bordering Busto Arsizio and Legnano (MI). During this period it faced constraints on the development of both cultural and sports activities, as well as leisure pursuits. Nevertheless, despite these limitations, passionate and volunteer citizens are making immense efforts to initiate local endeavors. Currently, fundraising is challenging as the disappearance of large companies, has resulted in the absence of patrons who traditionally financed various activities. It belongs on the page on Castellanza and does not directly relate to USD Castellanzese. It also contains inappropriate style e.g. 'neverthless', incorrect tense, subjectivity ('passionate', 'immense'). It also has no references for any of the content. Limelightangel ( talk) 09:42, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
The following paragraph has:
During those years, the USD Castellanzese included sections dedicated to cycling (the predominant activity due to the founders' boundless passion for the sport), with some presence in athletics, soccer, a motorcycle club, (which had 248 members in 1950), and finally, table tennis. It is essential to mention the names of those who were the founders of this club: the fisrt person is Giuseppe Scandrolio, the founder father, who was supported by key collaborators such as Ercole Airoldi, Alfredo Gamassi, Umberto Baita, and Pierino Albini. See: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style Limelightangel ( talk) 09:57, 19 November 2023 (UTC)
Maybe collect the sentences under one topic, and put into one paragraph rather than having three sentences on each row?
Rednax11 (
talk)
01:30, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
See: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Linking
Limelightangel ( talk) 15:22, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
https://www.castellanzese.com/wp-content/uploads/STATUTO-CASTELLANZESE-201502.pdf Liuc11Chiara ( talk) 15:02, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
https://www.castellanzese.com/le-strutture/ Liuc11Chiara ( talk) 15:19, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
The section: "history" contains too much directly translation and does not add up for corrensponding rules of wikipedia, therefor it needs to be rephrased Liuc11Anders ( talk) 13:23, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
When the pictures are avaliable add an image of the supports logo LIUC11Nicolai ( talk) 16:07, 28 November 2023 (UTC)
The youth sector was accidently cut off but it will be fixed later. Please do not do anything to it Liuc11Anders ( talk) 11:08, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
Useful links to create the pattern of the football kit:
/info/en/?search=Template:Football_kit/pattern_list#Stripes
https://neroverdestore.castellanzese.com/
/info/en/?search=Template:Football_kit ~~~~ Liuc11nicole ( talk) 15:59, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
Infobox was added by User:Luic1clement Rednax11 ( talk) 14:19, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Is has been sorted by combining the whole period from 1970-present instead
Fixed
Fixed
Changed tense in text. Rednax11 ( talk) 14:18, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
"were in very familiar" has been changed
Removed duplicate links. Rednax11 ( talk) 15:49, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Modification of paragraph "1920 to 1930" to introduce the Union Sportiva Castellanzese. Luic1clement ( talk) 17:02, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Modification "Black-green president" into "the USD Castellanzese president". Luic1clement ( talk) 17:02, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Added translation to "Sogno neroverde" Rednax11 ( talk) 14:17, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Link improvement. Luic1clement ( talk) 17:02, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Review of grammar errors done. Luic1clement ( talk) 16:31, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Review of grammar errors done. Luic1clement ( talk) 16:31, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Review of the dates format. Luic1clement ( talk) 16:31, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Lyrics of the anthem changed to italics. Rednax11 ( talk) 15:38, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
Limelightangel ( talk) 10:15, 4 December 2023 (UTC)
sponsors external links Liuc11Chiara ( talk) 14:16, 5 December 2023 (UTC)
Useful link for dates and numbers:
/info/en/?search=Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Dates_and_numbers Liuc11nicole ( talk) 18:34, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
Fixed for now, but may need continuous improvement as pictures are added
Done
Fixed - Now all have text and not URL
Youtube link has been deleted since it is not known if it is free to use or not La rassegna stampa needs a clear linked name, not a URL;
Added the right format to the links to USD Castellanzese. Rednax11 ( talk) 16:40, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
Added "in italian" to references. Rednax11 ( talk) 15:36, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
Has been added
Fixed
dublicates fixed
Fixed
Has been changed
link out made
Incorrect linkout removed
Fixed