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Re: Opposition to DESO
Personally speaking, I am all for the closure of DESO. Nonetheless, I felt that it was appropriate to change part of this section as it read more like (the excellent) CAAT newsheet than an encyclopeia article. If others have time to change the text further, keeping the powerful arguments yet phrasing them better they should continue along these lines. (Admittedly, there are better things to do with one's time than get involved in Wikipedia squabbles and pedantry!) —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamesAP ( talk • contribs) 22 January 2007
OK, I understand and accept your motives at the time. From the fact that you haven't edited the changes I made yesterday, I take it that you are broadly content with the current neutrality of the article. If not, do let me know.
I haven't quite got the hang of creating references, so apologise for how they interfere with the text at some points. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamesAP ( talk • contribs)
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Re: Opposition to DESO
Personally speaking, I am all for the closure of DESO. Nonetheless, I felt that it was appropriate to change part of this section as it read more like (the excellent) CAAT newsheet than an encyclopeia article. If others have time to change the text further, keeping the powerful arguments yet phrasing them better they should continue along these lines. (Admittedly, there are better things to do with one's time than get involved in Wikipedia squabbles and pedantry!) —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamesAP ( talk • contribs) 22 January 2007
OK, I understand and accept your motives at the time. From the fact that you haven't edited the changes I made yesterday, I take it that you are broadly content with the current neutrality of the article. If not, do let me know.
I haven't quite got the hang of creating references, so apologise for how they interfere with the text at some points. —Preceding unsigned comment added by JamesAP ( talk • contribs)
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