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Reviewer: WTF? ( talk) 15:49, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
"Past the I-287 crossing, the road passes to the and comes to another partial interchange with I-80 near the western terminus of I-280." -- incomplete sentence fragment. Looks like a direction (north/south/east/west) should be inserted after 'the'.
"The median splits as the road passes to the north of the Willowbrook Mall, with a exit serving the mall, before reaching the Spaghetti Junction interchange..." -- Is "Spaghetti junction" what this interchange is actually called? Or is this just what local residents refer to it as because of what it kind of looks like on maps? The official name of the interchange is what should be applied here; if many residents refer to it as "spaghetti junction", that could be noted, but it would need a citation to a reliable source. For example, the interchange in Louisville, Kentucky, is officially called the Kennedy interchange; but many residents refer to it as " Spaghetti junction" because that's what it kind of looks like. And a good deal of sources in local newspapers refer to it as such.
There's quite a few external links. Might be good to review the guidelines at WP:EL and trim a few. Many of the links appear to be going to individual PDF files on the same site -- is there any index page that we could be linking to, instead of linking to these 8-10 files separately?
The article is very close to meeting the six good article criteria. Once these issues are addressed, it can be promoted. I will leave it on hold until 3/8/2010 so that the issues may be resolved. Cheers! WTF? ( talk) 15:49, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
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Reviewer: WTF? ( talk) 15:49, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
"Past the I-287 crossing, the road passes to the and comes to another partial interchange with I-80 near the western terminus of I-280." -- incomplete sentence fragment. Looks like a direction (north/south/east/west) should be inserted after 'the'.
"The median splits as the road passes to the north of the Willowbrook Mall, with a exit serving the mall, before reaching the Spaghetti Junction interchange..." -- Is "Spaghetti junction" what this interchange is actually called? Or is this just what local residents refer to it as because of what it kind of looks like on maps? The official name of the interchange is what should be applied here; if many residents refer to it as "spaghetti junction", that could be noted, but it would need a citation to a reliable source. For example, the interchange in Louisville, Kentucky, is officially called the Kennedy interchange; but many residents refer to it as " Spaghetti junction" because that's what it kind of looks like. And a good deal of sources in local newspapers refer to it as such.
There's quite a few external links. Might be good to review the guidelines at WP:EL and trim a few. Many of the links appear to be going to individual PDF files on the same site -- is there any index page that we could be linking to, instead of linking to these 8-10 files separately?
The article is very close to meeting the six good article criteria. Once these issues are addressed, it can be promoted. I will leave it on hold until 3/8/2010 so that the issues may be resolved. Cheers! WTF? ( talk) 15:49, 22 February 2010 (UTC)