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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
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during July 1988.[1]).
Typhoon Huaning,then?
At 00:00 UTC on July 14, the JMA declared the system a tropical storm.[6] On the evening of July 14, the JTWC upgraded Warren to a typhoon.[2]Condense.
one hundred-six [...] one hundred eighty-sevenWhy not replace these with numerals? You've done the same for other casualty figures in the article.
Across the Guangdong Province,Axe "the".
Images are free/tagged and relevant. Article passes CopyVio detector. References are credible. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 00:32, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)
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during July 1988.[1]).
Typhoon Huaning,then?
At 00:00 UTC on July 14, the JMA declared the system a tropical storm.[6] On the evening of July 14, the JTWC upgraded Warren to a typhoon.[2]Condense.
one hundred-six [...] one hundred eighty-sevenWhy not replace these with numerals? You've done the same for other casualty figures in the article.
Across the Guangdong Province,Axe "the".
Images are free/tagged and relevant. Article passes CopyVio detector. References are credible. – ♠Vami _IV†♠ 00:32, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
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