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@ Hurricanehink: Is there any reason you gave this start? I mean I'm sure there are the typical problems seen throughout my articles at this stage but still; I historically have used C as a placeholder for articles in this stage. Y E Pacific Hurricane 16:34, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah ( talk · contribs) 20:32, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing this now... Heaven forbid a mishap like this from occurring again.
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The tenth tropical cyclone, sixth tropical storm, and third typhoon of the 1990 Pacific typhoon seasonCould you please provide a citation for this? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
The tenth tropical cyclone, sixth tropical storm, and third typhoon of the 1990 Pacific typhoon season". Instead, i changed it into
The fourth and the last tropical cyclone to be formed in June of the 1990 Pacific typhoon seasonand provided the citations neccessary.
over 30,000 individuals lost their homes. Overall, damage in the country was minor, however.These two statements seem to contradict one another. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Satellite imageryLink. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Satellite imagery showed signs of a well-defined low-level circulation and the disturbance was situated along with persistent convection, and the disturbance was situated in a weakly divergent environment aloftThe last two items could be combined or this could be split into two sentences. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
of winds of 65 km/h (40 mph)I would change this to "of 65 km/h (40 mph) winds to improve flow a bit. Also, I assume these were 10-minute sustained as well, correct? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Tracking west-northwestward around another upper-level anticyclone that was previously following Typhoon Ofelia and later merged with a subtropical ridge to its north,[1] Percy was upgraded into a severe tropical storm on June 22 by the JMA.Oh boy, that's a lot there. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
with the JMA subsequently following suitWhen did this occur? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
JTWC estimated that Ofelia obtained
Dvorak estimate of T6.0Could you list the wind values for that estimate? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Airline services in and out Yap was halted--> were halted. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
the island of Ngulu Atoll bore the broughtDid you mean bore the brunt? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
several houses lost their roof and power, television, and radio lines were downed", and television and radio lines were downed." Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Meanwhile, radio towers, power lines and television lines were downed as several houses lost their roofs.This is definitely
The typhoon posed enough of a threat to Hong Kong to warrant a No 1. hurricane signal briefly, but such signal was dropped within 24 hours, Nevertheless, a pressure of 999.4 mbar (29.51 inHg) was measured at the Hong Kong Royal Observatory early on June 29This should be split after 24 hours. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
High Island received 245 mm (9.6 in)I would add "of rain" after the measurement. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Two other villages lost power. Eleven people also had to be evacuated.Could these possibly be merged? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
slight damage was to crops.Delete "was". Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Floodwaters there was up to 2 m (6.6 ft) deepShould be "were". Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
tens of millions in damageUSD? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Roughly 20 km (12 mi) of a highway were destroyed.This is similar to the farmland sentences before it. It should be "was destroyed". Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Damage was estimated at US$28 millionIs there an estimate in Yuan? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
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@ Hurricanehink: Is there any reason you gave this start? I mean I'm sure there are the typical problems seen throughout my articles at this stage but still; I historically have used C as a placeholder for articles in this stage. Y E Pacific Hurricane 16:34, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah ( talk · contribs) 20:32, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing this now... Heaven forbid a mishap like this from occurring again.
Noah
Talk
20:32, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
The tenth tropical cyclone, sixth tropical storm, and third typhoon of the 1990 Pacific typhoon seasonCould you please provide a citation for this? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
The tenth tropical cyclone, sixth tropical storm, and third typhoon of the 1990 Pacific typhoon season". Instead, i changed it into
The fourth and the last tropical cyclone to be formed in June of the 1990 Pacific typhoon seasonand provided the citations neccessary.
over 30,000 individuals lost their homes. Overall, damage in the country was minor, however.These two statements seem to contradict one another. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Satellite imageryLink. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Satellite imagery showed signs of a well-defined low-level circulation and the disturbance was situated along with persistent convection, and the disturbance was situated in a weakly divergent environment aloftThe last two items could be combined or this could be split into two sentences. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
of winds of 65 km/h (40 mph)I would change this to "of 65 km/h (40 mph) winds to improve flow a bit. Also, I assume these were 10-minute sustained as well, correct? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Tracking west-northwestward around another upper-level anticyclone that was previously following Typhoon Ofelia and later merged with a subtropical ridge to its north,[1] Percy was upgraded into a severe tropical storm on June 22 by the JMA.Oh boy, that's a lot there. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
with the JMA subsequently following suitWhen did this occur? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
JTWC estimated that Ofelia obtained
Dvorak estimate of T6.0Could you list the wind values for that estimate? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Airline services in and out Yap was halted--> were halted. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
the island of Ngulu Atoll bore the broughtDid you mean bore the brunt? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
several houses lost their roof and power, television, and radio lines were downed", and television and radio lines were downed." Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Meanwhile, radio towers, power lines and television lines were downed as several houses lost their roofs.This is definitely
The typhoon posed enough of a threat to Hong Kong to warrant a No 1. hurricane signal briefly, but such signal was dropped within 24 hours, Nevertheless, a pressure of 999.4 mbar (29.51 inHg) was measured at the Hong Kong Royal Observatory early on June 29This should be split after 24 hours. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
High Island received 245 mm (9.6 in)I would add "of rain" after the measurement. Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Two other villages lost power. Eleven people also had to be evacuated.Could these possibly be merged? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
slight damage was to crops.Delete "was". Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Floodwaters there was up to 2 m (6.6 ft) deepShould be "were". Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
tens of millions in damageUSD? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Roughly 20 km (12 mi) of a highway were destroyed.This is similar to the farmland sentences before it. It should be "was destroyed". Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
Damage was estimated at US$28 millionIs there an estimate in Yuan? Noah Talk 21:17, 4 August 2020 (UTC)
@
Hurricane Noah: This is all Done. What do you think?
SMB9
9thx
my edits
13:21, 25 September 2020 (UTC)