" By contrast, the JMA estimated peak 10 minute winds of 175 km/h (110 mph) on September 2." who the hec id the JMa? I know, but the average American may not.
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply
"The typhoon first affected the Northern Marianas Islands, where it left $2.5 million (USD) in damage,[nb 1] after damaging or destroying 114 homes." change "after" to "while", since "after" just does not sound right, given the fact the $2.5 million is part of the damage total.
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply
"1 minute winds of 260 km/h (160 mph); this is the equivalent of a Category 5 on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale. " change "Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale" to "Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale".
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply
"and the airport was closed, stranding about 1,000 travelers.[17]" were these evacuated? Why are they together with the evacuation part of the sentence then?
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply
" By contrast, the JMA estimated peak 10 minute winds of 175 km/h (110 mph) on September 2." who the hec id the JMa? I know, but the average American may not.
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply
"The typhoon first affected the Northern Marianas Islands, where it left $2.5 million (USD) in damage,[nb 1] after damaging or destroying 114 homes." change "after" to "while", since "after" just does not sound right, given the fact the $2.5 million is part of the damage total.
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply
"1 minute winds of 260 km/h (160 mph); this is the equivalent of a Category 5 on the Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale. " change "Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Scale" to "Saffir-Simpson Hurricane Wind Scale".
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply
"and the airport was closed, stranding about 1,000 travelers.[17]" were these evacuated? Why are they together with the evacuation part of the sentence then?
YEPacificHurricane18:43, 3 July 2014 (UTC)reply