Hello YE, I will review this article today. It's been a while since I've reviewed a TC-related article.
" Flo began to rapidly intensify, and on September 17, Flo attained peak intensity." - Considering how strong Flo was, I think you should mention maybe the maximum sustained wind or the minimum pressure
The problem with this, and this is a longtime practice of mine in this basin is I don't want to play favorites among the JTWC and JMA, pre-2000 at least.
YEPacificHurricane00:08, 2 February 2019 (UTC)reply
"In Okayama prefecture on the main Japanese island" --> "In Okayama Prefecture on the main Japanese island"
"Along the west coast of central Japan, in Toyama prefecture, heavy rains caused" --> "Along the west coast of central Japan, in Toyama Prefecture, heavy rains caused"
"The town hall on Yusa Town, the roof of the town hall was destroyed." - Re-word that to something like this: "In Yusa Town, the roof of the town hall was destroyed."
"15 Dead, Seven Missing as Typhoon Flo Hits Western Japan". Associated Press. September 10, 1990." - That publication date cant be right. Did you mean September 20?
Hello YE, I will review this article today. It's been a while since I've reviewed a TC-related article.
" Flo began to rapidly intensify, and on September 17, Flo attained peak intensity." - Considering how strong Flo was, I think you should mention maybe the maximum sustained wind or the minimum pressure
The problem with this, and this is a longtime practice of mine in this basin is I don't want to play favorites among the JTWC and JMA, pre-2000 at least.
YEPacificHurricane00:08, 2 February 2019 (UTC)reply
"In Okayama prefecture on the main Japanese island" --> "In Okayama Prefecture on the main Japanese island"
"Along the west coast of central Japan, in Toyama prefecture, heavy rains caused" --> "Along the west coast of central Japan, in Toyama Prefecture, heavy rains caused"
"The town hall on Yusa Town, the roof of the town hall was destroyed." - Re-word that to something like this: "In Yusa Town, the roof of the town hall was destroyed."
"15 Dead, Seven Missing as Typhoon Flo Hits Western Japan". Associated Press. September 10, 1990." - That publication date cant be right. Did you mean September 20?