"Typhoon Dolphin was a powerful tropical cyclone that produced the first typhoon-force winds on Guam since Typhoon Pongsona in 2002. " mind linking to 2002 PTS at the end?
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
" It had a poorly-defined circulation and broad rainbands, while low to moderate wind shear and warm sea surface temperatures favored development.[2]" link to atmospheric circulation due to its first mention here.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I don't think that link is appropriate. That link talks more about broad scale circulations on earth, not circulations as small as ones in tropical cyclones. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
"Preparations and impact" to "Preparations, impact, and aftermath" since this section includes aftermath.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
" . Residents lost power and water access for up to two weeks. " appears to be a fragment.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I'm not sure I understand. Do you mean a sentence fragment? That's not the case. "Residents" is the subject, "lost" is the verb, "power and water access" is the direct object. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
"Passing just north of Guam, Dolphin produced the first typhoon-force winds since 2002 during Typhoon Pongsona.[1]" in Guam, right? You mention about Rota which is also north of Guam being the first typhoon winds since 2004?
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
Yea, I thought that was implied. I changed. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
"Dolphin damaged 390 houses across Guam, of which 9 were destroyed" spell out nine.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I'm keeping it as a numeral because it's in the same sentence as "390", per
WP:MOSNUM. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
"Typhoon Dolphin was a powerful tropical cyclone that produced the first typhoon-force winds on Guam since Typhoon Pongsona in 2002. " mind linking to 2002 PTS at the end?
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
" It had a poorly-defined circulation and broad rainbands, while low to moderate wind shear and warm sea surface temperatures favored development.[2]" link to atmospheric circulation due to its first mention here.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I don't think that link is appropriate. That link talks more about broad scale circulations on earth, not circulations as small as ones in tropical cyclones. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
"Preparations and impact" to "Preparations, impact, and aftermath" since this section includes aftermath.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
" . Residents lost power and water access for up to two weeks. " appears to be a fragment.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I'm not sure I understand. Do you mean a sentence fragment? That's not the case. "Residents" is the subject, "lost" is the verb, "power and water access" is the direct object. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
"Passing just north of Guam, Dolphin produced the first typhoon-force winds since 2002 during Typhoon Pongsona.[1]" in Guam, right? You mention about Rota which is also north of Guam being the first typhoon winds since 2004?
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
Yea, I thought that was implied. I changed. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
"Dolphin damaged 390 houses across Guam, of which 9 were destroyed" spell out nine.
YEPacificHurricane 00:12, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply
I'm keeping it as a numeral because it's in the same sentence as "390", per
WP:MOSNUM. ♫
Hurricanehink (
talk) 16:04, 23 February 2016 (UTC)reply