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Wording of opening paragragh

Hi, could the wording of the first paragragh before the contents box be re-worded please? There is one sentence with at least four commas in and it's very hard to read.

Many thanks

217.34.59.78 ( talk) 12:29, 8 March 2012 (UTC) reply

I've touched up the intro so as to make it more readable. —  DemonicPartyHat  talk 20:46, 6 May 2013 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Wording of opening paragragh

Hi, could the wording of the first paragragh before the contents box be re-worded please? There is one sentence with at least four commas in and it's very hard to read.

Many thanks

217.34.59.78 ( talk) 12:29, 8 March 2012 (UTC) reply

I've touched up the intro so as to make it more readable. —  DemonicPartyHat  talk 20:46, 6 May 2013 (UTC) reply

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