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I'm new to this but I feel I can significantly improve the quality of this page (or I would at least like to try)! I will maintain a neutral tone and use citations to verify all of my writing. I think this article on the truth campaign would benefit from the following additions/changes:
For each of these categories, I will comment on both the original “truth” campaign that ran from 2000-2014, as well as truth’s new “FinishIt” campaign that launched in August 2014 (truth redesigned its materials, shot a new series of ads, and came up with a new rallying cry for today’s youth: “We can be the generation that ends smoking”). This will be an important and timely distinction, as launch of the truth “FinishIt” campaign is likely driving many Americans to this Wikipedia article.
I welcome any feedback on this proposal as I would like my additions/changes to be meaningful. If I don't hear back from anyone I'll probably make these changes within the next month (mid-December 2014). -- Amj492 ( talk) 00:11, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
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I'm new to this but I feel I can significantly improve the quality of this page (or I would at least like to try)! I will maintain a neutral tone and use citations to verify all of my writing. I think this article on the truth campaign would benefit from the following additions/changes:
For each of these categories, I will comment on both the original “truth” campaign that ran from 2000-2014, as well as truth’s new “FinishIt” campaign that launched in August 2014 (truth redesigned its materials, shot a new series of ads, and came up with a new rallying cry for today’s youth: “We can be the generation that ends smoking”). This will be an important and timely distinction, as launch of the truth “FinishIt” campaign is likely driving many Americans to this Wikipedia article.
I welcome any feedback on this proposal as I would like my additions/changes to be meaningful. If I don't hear back from anyone I'll probably make these changes within the next month (mid-December 2014). -- Amj492 ( talk) 00:11, 13 November 2014 (UTC)