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Reviewer: Shaded0 ( talk · contribs) 04:28, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
I will begin reviewing the article some time over the next 2-3 days and should have some more in depth review comments for the article by Friday or Saturday. Please confirm for me and let me know if you will have time to address and work on this review process over the next week. Thanks! Shaded0 ( talk) 04:28, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
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Some initial things I noticed (feel free to comment below with the bullet points, I'll bullet my comments to make them stand out as things to address).
Just some style things first of all, will review content, sources, free use, etc. with the review when I have time.
History
- http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/....
- Conheça o luxuoso endereço em NY onde Marin cumpre prisão domiciliar (info) [uol.com.br] (Dead since 2016-12-12) - Will Trump side with U.S. airlines against Middle Eastern rivals? (info) [latimes.com] (Dead since 2017-02-07) - Tycoon with towering ambition (info) [fultonhistory.com] (Dead since 2017-02-07)
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In popular culture
Overall I think this meets GA criteria. Let me know when you are able to address the above points and I will go ahead and approve the request. Thanks for all the great work done on this article.
Will continue to add and review as I read through the article.
"..but some of the upper-floor commercial spaces come unfurnished, such as Donald J. Trump for President Inc.'s headquarters on the fifth floor"-
"There are stores selling Trump merchandise that are located in the atrium, some of which sell memorabilia for his 2016 presidential campaign;.."- I removed it.
Maybe another sentence or two expansion of 'Uses' subsection.
For the DOD inclusion, was this for office space, or some other use?
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Reviewer: Shaded0 ( talk · contribs) 04:28, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
I will begin reviewing the article some time over the next 2-3 days and should have some more in depth review comments for the article by Friday or Saturday. Please confirm for me and let me know if you will have time to address and work on this review process over the next week. Thanks! Shaded0 ( talk) 04:28, 22 February 2017 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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Overall: |
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Some initial things I noticed (feel free to comment below with the bullet points, I'll bullet my comments to make them stand out as things to address).
Just some style things first of all, will review content, sources, free use, etc. with the review when I have time.
History
- http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/....
- Conheça o luxuoso endereço em NY onde Marin cumpre prisão domiciliar (info) [uol.com.br] (Dead since 2016-12-12) - Will Trump side with U.S. airlines against Middle Eastern rivals? (info) [latimes.com] (Dead since 2017-02-07) - Tycoon with towering ambition (info) [fultonhistory.com] (Dead since 2017-02-07)
Security Issues
Architecture
Tenants
In popular culture
Overall I think this meets GA criteria. Let me know when you are able to address the above points and I will go ahead and approve the request. Thanks for all the great work done on this article.
Will continue to add and review as I read through the article.
"..but some of the upper-floor commercial spaces come unfurnished, such as Donald J. Trump for President Inc.'s headquarters on the fifth floor"-
"There are stores selling Trump merchandise that are located in the atrium, some of which sell memorabilia for his 2016 presidential campaign;.."- I removed it.
Maybe another sentence or two expansion of 'Uses' subsection.
For the DOD inclusion, was this for office space, or some other use?