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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah ( talk · contribs) 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC) reply


Will do the last one tonight. Noah Talk 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC) reply

  • then over northern Hainan replace the bolded with "and later"
  • and reach peak intensity. You should mention what the peak was.
  • ships were forced to take shelter Were they just docked? Something else?
  • Xuwen, Guangdong and Haikou, Hainan and Yangjiang, Guangdong Add commas after the second part of the location name.
  • 30 cm (12 in) Change cm measurement to 305 mm.
  • A total of 404 ships took shelter in the Port of Zhanjiang. Same thing here.. I assume they just docked.
  • Ewiniar also spawned a tornado in Dali Is there an EF rating?
  • Longgang District, Shenzhen Comma after the second part of the location name.
That should be it. Noah Talk 23:07, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Hurricane Noah: done, thanks for the review. ~  KN2731 { talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Hurricane Noah ( talk · contribs) 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC) reply


Will do the last one tonight. Noah Talk 23:13, 4 October 2020 (UTC) reply

  • then over northern Hainan replace the bolded with "and later"
  • and reach peak intensity. You should mention what the peak was.
  • ships were forced to take shelter Were they just docked? Something else?
  • Xuwen, Guangdong and Haikou, Hainan and Yangjiang, Guangdong Add commas after the second part of the location name.
  • 30 cm (12 in) Change cm measurement to 305 mm.
  • A total of 404 ships took shelter in the Port of Zhanjiang. Same thing here.. I assume they just docked.
  • Ewiniar also spawned a tornado in Dali Is there an EF rating?
  • Longgang District, Shenzhen Comma after the second part of the location name.
That should be it. Noah Talk 23:07, 5 October 2020 (UTC) reply
@ Hurricane Noah: done, thanks for the review. ~  KN2731 { talk · contribs} 02:09, 6 October 2020 (UTC) reply

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